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My Last Pain

2005-03-01, 00:58

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My Last Pain

I must confess to an evil state
To which will hold greater in time
I must delay this fate to me
A detestable life living with this
Through the hour I will find
A trip to pass my life must turn
Take my pulse and find my strength
See in this life a defective current

Now by storm or by glaring red sun
I shall change my state of being
Into the chill made by the hour
Dark red in color you vary in shape
Into the Earth spent and used
Life decieved but my pain is gone

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2005-03-01, 23:56

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Ah! Now powers' dear, 'i' before 'e' except after 'c' at the end of your piece. I think this would be cool read in a softer metal format with your viola they main instrument. I read it about 3 times and I liked the storyline and flow of it. Nice one. Are you putting this to music or is it poetry?

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2005-03-02, 00:07

powersofterror

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Haha, yeah I seem to be getting worse and worse at spelling which sucks. I only liked it (well not because it's mine but) because the reference to blood falling on the ground after the suicide was badass. Meh, it's just poetry.

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2005-03-03, 00:47

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Cool, dude.

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