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Old 2005-02-21, 10:55
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Burnt Black

This is all pretty random but it was intended to be. Hope you guys like it. It was sort of supposed to set an image but Im not really sure how well it does that.

Burnt Black

War!
Attack!
Attack!
Attack!
Warpath - Trampled into ground
Dominate!
Dominate!
Dominate!
Bullets, guns, fire, blood!
TERRITORY
Malevolence sadism masochistic
Bombs napalm and ballistics

WAR!

BURNT BLACK
BURNT BLACK
BURNT BLACK

BURNT BLACK
BURNT BLACK
BURNT BLACK

MENTALLY ATTACKED FUCKED IN THE BRAIN
Psychodelic, malevolent, urge to cause pain
Battle flags, slaughtered dead, nothing remains
SCORCHED EARTH DEAD BODIES KILL DEATH MAIM

WAR!

MALEVOLENT SLAUGHTER
Fucked up, smashed mangled
Youre fucking dead
Youre fucking dead
Youre fucking dead

BURNT BLACK
BURNT BLACK
BURNT BLACK

BURNT BLACK
BURNT BLACK
BURNT BLACK

WINGS OF STEEL
black blood burnt flags
Demons set flight bombs guns bullets death
WARPATH TRAMPLED OH WHAT A MESS!
bodies bullets grenades

War!
Attack!
Attack!
Attack!
Warpath - Trampled into ground
Dominate!
Dominate!
Dominate!
Bullets, guns, fire, blood!
TERRITORY
Malevolence sadism masochistic
Bombs napalm and ballistics

VIOLENCE SADISM NO REGRETS DIE
 
Old 2005-02-21, 11:00
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you've certainly taking a shining to your new sadistik exekution cd
 
Old 2005-02-21, 15:58
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Due to the tone of the piece I really wouldn't gripe about the 'bad words' in it. Definitely a screamy/ growly type thing. You could do a lot of stuff musically with it. Flow and wording was alright. No problems.
I wouldn't buy it unless it had kickass music, but it's just not the usual thing I'd really get into. You did a cool job on it though.
heh heh Can you imagine a country western song with a lyric like that?
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Old 2005-02-22, 08:34
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Can you imagine a country western song with a lyric like that?


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yeah, it was good mofo myles. better than your other one
 
Old 2005-02-23, 04:06
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Haha thanks, I've been writing alot of Sadistik type songs [for those that don't know, it's War Metal (Don't flame me for saying that arseholes) with hyper frantic riffing, constant blastbeats and screamed vocals in an Australian accent].

This band also has the best bass player ever.

Shut up
 
Old 2005-02-23, 14:10
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Well, that's cool because that's about what I was hearing in my head with this one. I guess you got that across well just from the lyric. I haven't heard the particular band you're talking about though.
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-wally: Mom, you shouldn't play after me because it makes you sound even worse than you already do. -wally:*grumbles and whispers quietly* I guess it's cuz I love you or something, but you're still a TURD
Grimm:I could read your mind but its in font size .5
Amadeus:Oh, and was there a cesserole (never mind spelling) involved?
Paddy:the fact that you didn't end up on a kids show makes me question my atheism
Dyldo: You evil strumpet!
 
Old 2005-03-21, 23:06
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Quote:
Originally Posted by Infinity
This is all pretty random but it was intended to be. Hope you guys like it. It was sort of supposed to set an image but Im not really sure how well it does that.

Burnt Black

War!
Attack!
Attack!
Attack!
Warpath - Trampled into ground
Dominate!
Dominate!
Dominate!
Bullets, guns, fire, blood!
TERRITORY
Malevolence sadism masochistic
Bombs napalm and ballistics

WAR!

BURNT BLACK
BURNT BLACK
BURNT BLACK

BURNT BLACK
BURNT BLACK
BURNT BLACK

MENTALLY ATTACKED FUCKED IN THE BRAIN
Psychodelic, malevolent, urge to cause pain
Battle flags, slaughtered dead, nothing remains
SCORCHED EARTH DEAD BODIES KILL DEATH MAIM

WAR!

MALEVOLENT SLAUGHTER
Fucked up, smashed mangled
Youre fucking dead
Youre fucking dead
Youre fucking dead

BURNT BLACK
BURNT BLACK
BURNT BLACK

BURNT BLACK
BURNT BLACK
BURNT BLACK

WINGS OF STEEL
black blood burnt flags
Demons set flight bombs guns bullets death
WARPATH TRAMPLED OH WHAT A MESS!
bodies bullets grenades

War!
Attack!
Attack!
Attack!
Warpath - Trampled into ground
Dominate!
Dominate!
Dominate!
Bullets, guns, fire, blood!
TERRITORY
Malevolence sadism masochistic
Bombs napalm and ballistics

VIOLENCE SADISM NO REGRETS DIE
R U HAPPY??


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Old 2005-03-23, 03:56
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This song sucks. Hahaha shouldnt have even posted it. Must have been in the mood for stuff that don't make sense
 
Old 2005-03-23, 19:15
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Well, it's a darn sight better than that phuckity, phuckity, phuck phuck phuckin' thing I just read.
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-wally: Mom, you shouldn't play after me because it makes you sound even worse than you already do. -wally:*grumbles and whispers quietly* I guess it's cuz I love you or something, but you're still a TURD
Grimm:I could read your mind but its in font size .5
Amadeus:Oh, and was there a cesserole (never mind spelling) involved?
Paddy:the fact that you didn't end up on a kids show makes me question my atheism
Dyldo: You evil strumpet!

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