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2005-02-18, 09:05
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Disinfinite
Not my usual crap, but hey.
Your stars and your crosses
Left me tonight
Lost in the constelations of your veins
I watched you coil and hiss
In pain and bliss
Two times the lies on your forked tongue
You're beautiful and I forgot to tell you.
Infinity In A Number
Infinitify In The Palm Of Your Hand
Infinity In An Eye
Your scars and my losses
I feel alive
Feeding on the mana of your pain
Screaming your name at the stars
Maybe that way you'll listen
Two times the venom on your forked tongue
You're addictive and I forgot to consume you.
Infinity In A Number
Infinitify In The Palm Of Your Hand
Infinity In An Eye
Tearing and twisting me
Again and again and again
Two times the venom on your forked tongue
You're addictive and I forgot to consume you.
Two times the lies on your forked tongue
You're beautiful and I forgot to tell you.
Infinity In A Number
Infinitify In The Palm Of Your Hand
Infinity In An Eye
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2005-02-18, 09:41
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wow, that's pretty good.....  some pretty clever word usage, liked the "forked tongue" part. depression helps you write good sometimes... |
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2005-02-18, 10:51
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DISINFINITE???   *Gulp* |
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2005-02-18, 15:45
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I do like the first part of this best because of the imagery, but the rest was pretty good, too. What's the story on this one?
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-wally: Mom, you shouldn't play after me because it makes you sound even worse than you already do. -wally:*grumbles and whispers quietly* I guess it's cuz I love you or something, but you're still a TURD
Grimm:I could read your mind but its in font size .5
Amadeus:Oh, and was there a cesserole (never mind spelling) involved?
Paddy:the fact that you didn't end up on a kids show makes me question my atheism
Dyldo: You evil strumpet!
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2005-02-18, 20:31
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Thanks everybody, I wub you in a e-wub forum teddy bear type way!
Well, constelations of veins - playing connect the dots on your arms, you know? I lost a friend to a pill addiction a few weeks ago, but I guessed it wouldn't have the same impact as heroin and other injectable drugs, basically watching someone go down the shitter while they ignore you and leave you for the crowd that gives them more drugs. The snake idea comes from heroin addicts hissing and rocking forwards and backwards when they get that badly needed hit. It's Disinfinite because I guess those people would want it to go on forever, but can't. That's pretty much it.
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2005-02-19, 00:46
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I'm very sorry about your friend. It doesn't matter what the addiction. It's still rough.
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My eldest son's bipolar website: www.bipolarmanifesto.com
-wally: Mom, you shouldn't play after me because it makes you sound even worse than you already do. -wally:*grumbles and whispers quietly* I guess it's cuz I love you or something, but you're still a TURD
Grimm:I could read your mind but its in font size .5
Amadeus:Oh, and was there a cesserole (never mind spelling) involved?
Paddy:the fact that you didn't end up on a kids show makes me question my atheism
Dyldo: You evil strumpet!
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2005-02-19, 01:28
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Originally Posted by L,B'XXX
I'm very sorry about your friend. It doesn't matter what the addiction. It's still rough.
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yeah that's true. i'm losing a friend as we speak. not to drugs, but to pedophilia. i've already had my best friend die and this is almost as bad because this won't be physically fatal to him, but he'll be stuffed. |
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