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Old 2005-02-09, 20:02
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Bite The Preacher

this is meant to be a shitty black metal tune.

Church bell tolls
off to the grind
line the pews
with sheepish minds
preacher comes
podium high
fat with wealth
filled with lies

Bite the preacher
abhorrent creature
fed of ignorance
eternal leecher

the pious cunt
devoid of guilt
once deflowered
does quickly wilt

Bite the preacher
abhorrent creature
fed of ignorance
eternal leecher

does steal our bread
does steal our wine
does fuck our women,
how divine
does horde our gold
does steal our minds
does rape our young,
how divine
does eat our food
does drink our wine
does take his "fair share"
how divine
does warn of hell
for sins of swine
does break his own laws
how divine

Bite the preacher
abhorrent creature
fed of ignorance
eternal leecher
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Old 2005-02-11, 23:10
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for christs sake, someone atleast tell me it fucking sucks or something.
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Old 2006-07-18, 04:03
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anyone, its been well over a year, but i recently found this again, and i want comments for christs sake : )
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Old 2006-07-18, 11:57
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Well, get your thong outta your craw. I found this pretty amusing since my minister is a woman. hehe

I detest the message it's saying, but the flow was good and it was worded in a way that brought some cliche ideas a little freshness. It had some drive to it which would work well in the type song you suggest.

Must be about catholics.
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Old 2006-07-18, 17:58
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yeah, it is about catholicism, like back in medieval times, when the church was the power.
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Old 2006-07-19, 04:36
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like L,B'XXX said it flows good,really good was it meant to be a faster song or mid tempo?
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Old 2006-07-19, 05:16
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faster, old school black metal style
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Old 2006-07-19, 06:12
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yeahh

it sounds like a venom song..

haha
i like it
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Old 2006-07-23, 18:11
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Not bad.
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Old 2006-07-24, 04:54
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Didnt like the chorus
 
Old 2006-07-27, 21:58
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Not bad for something that was supposed to be crappy.

Better than a lot of black metal lyrics. Which, isn't really saying much, so don't take that as an insult.

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