Heres some lyrics of my grind band:

-Cemetary Fistfuck(frozen knuckles)-

It's so cold, you're hot and needy
Cemetary fistfuck my knuckles freeze
I cover them with frozen seed

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-I Pull out your moist womb-

I Pull out your moist womb

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-Half Rotten Schlong-

It's a horse schlong
It's so long and rotten
I stuck it inside children
And rape them with scissors

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-A meal for two-

The fat lady next door
With two kittens and a young daughter
had to die for you
Cos' now I have prepared
This lovely meal for two
Antropofagi

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-Inferior Tongueslave-

Kneel and Suck Whore
You're inferior I'm God
Swallow my seed
as I cum
Assbastardfuckedtenthousandtimes

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the lyrics are written by me and our drummer, and we think that we managed quite well. It's what our music is supposed to be.
Opininons?

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If those are all from different songs, their rather short aren't they?

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They're supposed to be. We're not Manowar you know. No offense to Manowar fans, but our songs are approx. <1minute.
Short, fast and brutal like a kick in the groin.
And I wanted opinions conserning the lyrics, not the length of our songs.

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Honest oppinions?. I think they fuckin suck ass. I like lyrics with a bit of substance and meaning you know, just cause it's death metal doesn't mean the lyrics need to be stupid, that's just what I think, it's usually the music I'm listening to anyway.

Ok, first of all, thank you for being honest.
What we tried to do here, is to create a monster.
There's no need for the lyrics to be Intelligent or anything like that.
It may be quite hard for you to say if the lyrics work for us cos you dont know the image we try to build.
But anyway, if you see the lyrics stupid, thats good too.
They are supposed to make opinions.
We're not a fucking hippie-band you should love.

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hmmm, they're more 'trying-to-be-gory' than actually gory. The thing with the horse dick is a bit childish. the frozen knuckle thing is funny.

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What the fuck are you on?

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about a 50/50 effort, some bad, some really good. a meal for two rocked my s0x.

Yeah, I like "a meal for two" myself too.
They might be a little childish, but they're not supposed to be taken seriously.
I think that we should really improve some of them, but they are the first lyrics we ever made, so they're not final.
I'm pleased of your comments though, they show where our stuff is lacking and that's goos, I suppose.
As soon as we edit some of them, I'll post them here.
And BTW doctor, we are not trying to be gory, we just wanna have fun.

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