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2005-01-28, 02:05
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I am a tax on the world..
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the Deadman's Heaven
I wrote this for the band I'm in, called the Deadman's Heaven. I finished the writing of the music a couple days ago, and haha, I love it  .
Here in the cave of my insanity
I can't get this voice out of my head
He is calling to me
"Pure evil pure chaos" he tells me
What can't he go away
And find someone else to annoy
But it's getting stronger
And I don't think I want to get away
Together and one, we will be
Kill the seeds that love brings,
Depart your grounds and fly to me,
Live in my kingdom and touch the light,
In the deepest darkest of the night
Soon I will depart
Sin and kill and face this fear
The earth so desired
and shivered in the light
the ground shook open
and I fell forever
Kill the seeds that love brings,
Depart your grounds and fly to me,
Live in my kingdom and touch the light,
In the deepest darkest of the night
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Man, I get real sweaty after I wack my dong. Yeah, cause I headbang while I do, and I can't really "Jump" (haha ) like VanHalen in a dorm room, so I just walk back and forth....haha a couple days ago I was jumping up and down on my bed, with my pants down and my roommate came in when I wasn't looking, hahaha.
 
This is my band's page
http://www.myspace.com/ferocitydentontx
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2005-01-28, 05:47
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Life is pain.
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A bit cheesy imo. Kinda cliche'd...
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2005-01-28, 12:44
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I am a tax on the world..
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Well I get the cliche, because you're an idiot if you can't figure out that it's about the devil. Cheesy eh? meh...
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Man, I get real sweaty after I wack my dong. Yeah, cause I headbang while I do, and I can't really "Jump" (haha ) like VanHalen in a dorm room, so I just walk back and forth....haha a couple days ago I was jumping up and down on my bed, with my pants down and my roommate came in when I wasn't looking, hahaha.
This is my band's page
http://www.myspace.com/ferocitydentontx
Last edited by powersofterror : 2005-01-28 at 12:50.
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2005-01-28, 12:49
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Life is pain.
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Uhh what? It seemed that way to me.
The lyrics seem that way to average PM/BM, just, eww I didn't like it. Don't take offense to it, I could have just said "Oh this sucks its gay fuck you oh yuk"
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2005-01-28, 12:50
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haha, sorry I edited my post... 
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Man, I get real sweaty after I wack my dong. Yeah, cause I headbang while I do, and I can't really "Jump" (haha ) like VanHalen in a dorm room, so I just walk back and forth....haha a couple days ago I was jumping up and down on my bed, with my pants down and my roommate came in when I wasn't looking, hahaha.
This is my band's page
http://www.myspace.com/ferocitydentontx
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2005-01-29, 13:15
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Id sing this to myself, but I can't find my gigantic blond wig and my tight leather pants are in the wash |
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2005-01-29, 16:42
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I'm not going to wear tight leather pants...they're going to be jeans
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Man, I get real sweaty after I wack my dong. Yeah, cause I headbang while I do, and I can't really "Jump" (haha ) like VanHalen in a dorm room, so I just walk back and forth....haha a couple days ago I was jumping up and down on my bed, with my pants down and my roommate came in when I wasn't looking, hahaha.
This is my band's page
http://www.myspace.com/ferocitydentontx
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2005-01-30, 23:15
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What did you do with my powers'??? Where's all the wonderful imagery? There's no color or sarcasm or what did you do with powers' ??? 
I suppose it's okay, but far from the descript pieces I'm used to. You're allowed to do something like this once in awhile I guess, but I read the first few lines and if you'd written it in your usual style it would have had a lot more adjectives in it.
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-wally: Mom, you shouldn't play after me because it makes you sound even worse than you already do. -wally:*grumbles and whispers quietly* I guess it's cuz I love you or something, but you're still a TURD
Grimm:I could read your mind but its in font size .5
Amadeus:Oh, and was there a cesserole (never mind spelling) involved?
Paddy:the fact that you didn't end up on a kids show makes me question my atheism
Dyldo: You evil strumpet!
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2005-01-31, 04:51
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Jesus...I'm sorry  .
It was written like this because it fits exactly with the music. Maybe days from now I'll suddenly be in "that mood" and fix it  .
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Man, I get real sweaty after I wack my dong. Yeah, cause I headbang while I do, and I can't really "Jump" (haha ) like VanHalen in a dorm room, so I just walk back and forth....haha a couple days ago I was jumping up and down on my bed, with my pants down and my roommate came in when I wasn't looking, hahaha.
This is my band's page
http://www.myspace.com/ferocitydentontx
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2005-01-31, 13:29
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Aw, I still love ya. Everything you write doesn't have to be heavy lyrically, but I was just surprised is all.
Rawk on.
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-wally: Mom, you shouldn't play after me because it makes you sound even worse than you already do. -wally:*grumbles and whispers quietly* I guess it's cuz I love you or something, but you're still a TURD
Grimm:I could read your mind but its in font size .5
Amadeus:Oh, and was there a cesserole (never mind spelling) involved?
Paddy:the fact that you didn't end up on a kids show makes me question my atheism
Dyldo: You evil strumpet!
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