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2004-12-22, 14:41

powersofterror

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These are just a few cool lines I felt like writing down before I forgot. Maybe I do something with it later...

That which is banished to my heart into fear
As silence darkens and the thunder rolls on
A miasma passing through my skin and there
It rots with my soul

Yet here in the wind I can smell my guilt
A feeling I cannot shudder or force away
Through wind and fog it will always be here
Feeding my heart

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2004-12-22, 15:10

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"Yet here in the wind I can smell my guilt."

That line is one of the best I have heard in a long time. Good work, conisdering its just spur of the moment prose.

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2004-12-22, 16:50

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Quote:

Originally Posted by powersofterror

It rots with my soul

Yet here in the wind I can smell my guilt
A feeling I cannot shudder or force away
Through wind and fog it will always be here

Nah, it sounds like powers' ate too much chili last night and he's rather pungent.

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