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Old 2004-12-06, 23:19
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Demachinising, Industrial

Demachinising

I took my body back screaming,
Every cell fighting a miniscule battle for it's existence,
every cell for itself.
Pushing back the invasion,
I'm demachinising,
tonight.

I looked up and saw you gleaming,
fever running through me like a fugitive of light,
I'm tired of chasing it as if I'm in love with it,
I'm demachinising,
tonight.

Forgive me, but I'm leaving,
There's no more point in these cloy lies,
I'm mercilessly tearing my eyes open,
I'm demachinising,
tonight.


Demachinising is a word I made up, like detoxifying but instead of toxin it's a machine of some sort. Judge judge.
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Old 2004-12-07, 11:57
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Well, I'm allfor made up words, but demechanizing would sound a little better in this case. I like this. That second verse was right on. Loved that one. "m hearing this with really vibrant edgy loud music with some razor sharp guitars. Cool.
Rock on!
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