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2004-12-05, 08:39
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Vampiric Lust
"Vampiric Lust"
i lurk in the distance,
from the prey i've chose,
waiting for the chance,
watching from the shadows,
pulse rising out of fear,
hastening your stroll,
you realise that i am near,
stalking mortal souls,
i watch you from above,
adoring my frightened sheep,
craving your warm blood,
crimson ecstasy i reap,
lay my cold hand on your face,
you stare into the distance,
infactuated by the taste,
cradling you as an infant,
nearly vacant veins,
free of pain and duress,
a lifeless body remains,
your innocense put to rest,
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2004-12-05, 09:14
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FUCKING HOFF-STYLE!!!!!!!
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That was kinda cool
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2004-12-05, 09:35
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nice!
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2004-12-06, 00:51
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That was pretty cool in an eerie sorta way. You had more of a passionate angle to it instead of getting gross about it. Not too bad.
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Amadeus:Oh, and was there a cesserole (never mind spelling) involved?
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2004-12-06, 21:48
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Originally Posted by L,B'XXX
That was pretty cool in an eerie sorta way. You had more of a passionate angle to it instead of getting gross about it. Not too bad.
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2004-12-07, 11:12
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Well, whenyou start getting murderous/torturous/vampirish with the last 10 year old Christian virgin on earth getting stalked and blungeoned(sp.) it gets a bit redundant and BOOOOORING!!!!!! And begins to sound like black/death metal Weird Al gone bad. Some suspence and unlovey-dovey romanticism is cool. But that's just my own idea. I know a lot of you guys like the eyeballs on a platter type songs. (And that's not a wink. I'm missing one of mine. heehee)
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-wally: Mom, you shouldn't play after me because it makes you sound even worse than you already do. -wally:*grumbles and whispers quietly* I guess it's cuz I love you or something, but you're still a TURD
Grimm:I could read your mind but its in font size .5
Amadeus:Oh, and was there a cesserole (never mind spelling) involved?
Paddy:the fact that you didn't end up on a kids show makes me question my atheism
Dyldo: You evil strumpet!
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