The thrashing in minds of sorrow,
the outcries scream in the morrow.
Let them fade in the obscure sky,
the light faded in her sigh.

Our eyes meet once again for time,
is it love now....
for a hundred sun rises will climb.
forever after-is it now....

Drink from me i never looked so pale,
the freezing eyes beneath the veil.
The beauty was casted from her skin,
in open wounds of malevolent sin.

Treachery and lust bangs on the cold gates,
for further and further we drift apart.
Surely a lonesome life awaits us in the meadows,
for our happiness was cast to the shadows.

Our eyes meet once again for time,
is it love now....
for a hundred sun rises will climb.
forever after-is it now....

was it ever..
just a goodbye..

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Cool, could fit an obituary song well! it has this death-metal ring to it somehow, was that what you had in mind when writing this?


could work out great with some mean ass riffs, nice work!

Was thinking about a past relationship, and how being friends just strings along old romances.. but i have the music written, its pretty fast trill picking type riffs.

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