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2004-10-25, 21:42
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The stars
Now, I just had some "inspiration" and I wrote this. I decided I'd share it with you, to see what you think and feel about it.
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laugh at the stars
in their serene absence
leading the way to nowhere
going away from us
follow the stars to nowhere
go with them to oblivion
they forgot the forgiven
you forgot forgivness
now, laugh at the stars
for they are merilly insidious
leading you away
to nowhere
go with them
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seems like you got a case of stupidphobia
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2004-10-25, 23:19
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dsnt trust ne1 < 30
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I think this could be two fold in interpretation which is cool. It could be the ones in the sky or it could be media stars, too. It had good flow and wording. Very mellow and enjoyable.
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My eldest son's bipolar website: www.bipolarmanifesto.com
-wally: Mom, you shouldn't play after me because it makes you sound even worse than you already do. -wally:*grumbles and whispers quietly* I guess it's cuz I love you or something, but you're still a TURD
Grimm:I could read your mind but its in font size .5
Amadeus:Oh, and was there a cesserole (never mind spelling) involved?
Paddy:the fact that you didn't end up on a kids show makes me question my atheism
Dyldo: You evil strumpet!
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2004-10-25, 23:35
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I am a tax on the world..
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Actually not bad. Kinda like you're "boldly going nowhere."
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2004-10-28, 19:52
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Very interesting. Not at all what I though about when I wrote it, but I can very much understand your ways of seeing it too.
I don't want to say what I connected it to yet, I want to see if someone has any more thoughts first.
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seems like you got a case of stupidphobia
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