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2004-10-25, 21:42

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The stars

Now, I just had some "inspiration" and I wrote this. I decided I'd share it with you, to see what you think and feel about it.
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laugh at the stars
in their serene absence
leading the way to nowhere
going away from us

follow the stars to nowhere
go with them to oblivion
they forgot the forgiven
you forgot forgivness

now, laugh at the stars
for they are merilly insidious
leading you away
to nowhere

go with them
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2004-10-25, 23:19

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I think this could be two fold in interpretation which is cool. It could be the ones in the sky or it could be media stars, too. It had good flow and wording. Very mellow and enjoyable.

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2004-10-25, 23:35

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Actually not bad. Kinda like you're "boldly going nowhere."

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2004-10-28, 19:52

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Very interesting. Not at all what I though about when I wrote it, but I can very much understand your ways of seeing it too.
I don't want to say what I connected it to yet, I want to see if someone has any more thoughts first.

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