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"Brain Ache"

2004-09-08, 15:52

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"Brain Ache"

The verses are slower yet edgy and the choruses I hear a lot of crash. The outro is heavy and has trailing arpeggio at the end. Comments and reads appreciated.

"Brain Ache"

Receptors in my head
Scream as they pulse through
Eyes unfocused
I don't feel there's a cure
No, cure at all for the way I feel

(chorus)
Take away the pressure
Tale away the pain
Take away the sickness
And let me live again

Somewhere there's someone with elixirs
That will melt the elastic that surrounds me
I can not see it in the distance
It's nowhere in sight

(chorus)
Take away the pressure
Tale away the pain
Take away the sickness
And let me live again

(outro)
Let me live again
Live again
Live again
Let me live again
Oh yeah

BJH

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2004-09-16, 06:48

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yeah, sounds like nu metal , like linkin park. imo

2004-09-17, 00:45

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Quote:

Originally Posted by Morbid+Roach

Hey "severed head stoner"! You remind me of the dough boy! If I poke your stomach will you go "oohoohoohoohoohoo!"

You also remind me of this guy...

dumbass...

Oh, by the way, these lyrics suck like a vacuum stuck up your mom's loose #####...

Ok roach you just went on my 'Gay faggot cunts' list.

2004-09-18, 05:05

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EDIT: thread fixed

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2004-09-19, 08:56

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Eh, Linkin Park? Oh well, try again.

You guys want to bicker take to Chit Chat or pm each other. You're wasting my time when I could be reading all my reviews !!

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