I never really finished this or tried to make it better. I wrote it quickly and somewhat enjoy it...

Boom
Boom
Boom
The Goliath coming forth
through the dark brown dust

Legs of cold metal
ravage the wasteland

Stiff movements increase the
fright of this dreadnaught

Boom
Boom
Boom
Venomous, lifeless eyes stare
insearch of pray

Handling the largest of buildings
with the ease of lifting a twig

The sun halts and resumes
as the behemoth travels forth

Boom
Boom
Boom
The quakes are getting louder
The end is near

I hope I am hidden
away from this mammoth machine

He is here with cold metal hands
destruction, the juggernaut...

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There was an old song that had boom, boom, boom, boom in it and I can't remember what it was now! It was from the late 70's or early 80's from what I remember and I think it's been used in tv commercials.

Anyways, it might be cool to use as an intro with very basic looped material forehand and then get into more of a rockin' metal thing with a more detailed storyline. You could go back to the beginning then at the end and sort of fade out with bass boom boom's then. Just thoughts.

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these aren't lyrics lol I'd let you know if they were though...the boom is suppose to be the boom of the juggernaut. but i'm sure you know that.

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No, I did not actually. I thought they were vocal booms so thatnks for the clarification. If they had been in ( ) or you had said somewhere in the post it would have been clearer but that's cool.

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