i totally dig it.

[intro]
vicious grunt

[verse 1]
On the second moon in fall,
we sail out from the north,
Galleons of men tall,
to fight with shield and sword,

[verse 2]
We sacrifice a goat,
to please our warlord Thor,
Together drinking blood,
preparing ourselves for war,

[chorus]
lands of christians we pass by,
by our swords they will die,
for father Odinn!

[verse 3]
debarking our longboats,
drawing bloodstained swords,
remembering our ouths,
to father odinn's hordes,

[interlude]

[bridge]
we feast 'pon their flesh,
when all pigs are killed,
drinking from our horns,
with hatred we are filled,

[chorus]

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hahahahahahahahaha, what is this?!?!?!?! Teenage Metal? I like the intro, and that's about it...

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Wellll, using virgins and Christians usually knocks a piece down a peg or too to me. It just seems a little lame. But like powers ' said the intro was okay. Personally I didn't think the rest was so bad except I'd change the Christians. Not because I am one even though I am, but just use something more imaginative.
It's like --(sarcastic sigh) oh for cryin' out . Do we have to pillage and plunder the Christians -AGAIN????? I don't wanna go then. I'll wait and battle the Saxons or Swahili's.

So smack your bud up side of the headbone and tell him to get jiggy with it! And at first I got an AC/DC feel from it cuz I'd just listened to Dirty Deeds but it has a lot of flexiblityespecially with the Nordic flavor.

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how about something like lands of our mortal enemy instead of lands of christians. I don't know just a thought. Not nearly the skill of Amon Amarth lyrics

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Do ya think if he wrote that well and got paid that kinda money that he'd post it here ? This is a mere stepping stone. When I'm famous with my books I'll come back and say hi though.

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You'd better, punk. And I'd see about those books too, and be able to say, "hey, I talk to her over the internet." BTW, I meant the intro as in....vicious grunt...not the lyrics.

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I'm the doctor's mate and also the person who wrote this piece,

first of all, powersofterror, I was looking at your profile and I came to the conclusion that you're in fact quite gay (sorry to go argumentum ad hominem on you but...)

"favourite bands: fucking OldMan'sChild, fucking Dimmu, fucking Buckethead, fucking Dio, fucking Rising Force, fucking Death, fucking Scorpians, fucking Van Halen, fucking Kalmah, god...fuckin' son of a bitch!!!GONADS MOTHER FUCKER!!! WHAMSSHITTWERRR!!WRWAAAHH!!!!"

I'm serious, what are you? No seriously unlog this respected metalforum, go listen to your slipknot hippie records, and fuck yourself.

second of all, I did not intent to go public with these lyrics at all. My mate posted them without my permission (not that I give a fuck).

third of all, it is NOT poetry they are mere lines to be grunted and screamed out on the rythm of a drumpart that I've already written, and I'm sure any REAL metalhead would agree that they actually sound quite brutal in the final version of the song.

fourth of all, I am not a serious writer of Vikingmetal (a genre that I grant my utmost respect!) I was merely trying to write a standard viking-song by taking cliche's and putting them into a song. Anyone who thinks this is a meant to be serious song is a complete retard.

(fifth: the christians were in the early medevil times more victim of the viking invaders than any, simply because they were so rich, so many and so eager to spread their belief like the filthy disease that it actually is, heathens hate it when someone does that!)

SO... seriously stop wasting your time commenting on this thread or I will hunt you down and nail you on the outerside of my oaken bow (to be using another vikingcliche!) Skoll.

HA, Doctor's gay

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hahaha, and you're dead Bestial Longboard Sucker

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Actually the funny thing about the Norse is that when they pillaged and plundered they tended to stay in some places afterwards. They were actually convert to christianity for some unknown reason...go look it up...no joke.


But anyways Doctor you are dumb.

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STFU noob

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hahahahahaha.
1. I don't give a shit, and no where does it say that I listen to slipknot, and I fuck myself anyway. Did you register to this "respected metalforum" just so you could bitch at me? Haha, pathetic.
2. Not that I give a fuck either.
3. If they are "mere lines" to an end, why the fuck do you care so much that I'm the only one that didn't like them?!
4. Who's the retard? If Viking metal isn't serious why the hell are you so serious about it?
5. Who the hell cares about christians? They're just a bunch of people, are you afraid they might preach to you and covert you or something?!

Shit, everyone has their rights to opinions on this forum, and Nomad tries to keep shit like this out. Go the fuck away or just be nice and take a sarcastic crit from me with the respect we both should have. Bitch.

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OMFG PIZZOWNED!

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nothing personal, powersofterror.
I just don't like you is all.
no wait that is personal.

You smell.

being an antichrist should be as much respected as being christian. its just a different believe.

Christians bash anti-christs and the other way around, so i dont see the problem with him writing an anti-christian lyric. Look at slayer in exemplum.

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I don't see why you should bash anybody in the first place just because of their belief. Has any christian ever bashed YOU in particular? It certainly has never happened to me, ha, almost everyone I can think of knows I'm no christian and they don't bash me..parents, bros, sister, friends, so why bash them? It's the anti-christians that start this shit. Christians just makes asses of themsevles by involving themselves in it.

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its nothing personal, he means it more in general (i think).

Before confusement kicks in. I'm not a severe anti-christ, they dont need to die. they just should stop being hypocrites and stop doing everything the bible sais. form an own opinion!

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Alright you wankers that are dissing me cuz I'm a Bible thumper, eat my soggy shorts !
I'm not that familiar with viking lore and I'm not that familiar with the era you're referring to as, beieve it or not, I'm not quite THAT old. Close, but no ceegar. I usually look at a piece as far as it having the widest appeal and that might make or break a parental advisory at Walmart and prevent millions of sales which would add up to a bunch of fat stacks of green for you. SO if you wanna leave the Christians in there be my guest because in the end it's your piece and you could have liked gorillas in there instead of Christians and chose to keep it. It's YOUR piece in the end and NO ONE but you can change it !

Anyways, I just wanted to see if I could use wankers and Bible in the sentence and I did so it's good day. Good day.
Fight nice now, guys.
Mom

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Hey ladies! Stop the damn bickering, before I stick my internet foot up your ass.

Who the f*ck are you calling a lady ! I've NEVER been sooo insulted ! Hmpf!

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I agree. And sacraficing goats for Thor? hat the hell are you on, nowhere in norse mythology does it ever say to sacrifice goats. That is satanistic style

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