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Old 2004-09-01, 20:43
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It's the first time I post some lyrics.
I'm thinking of putting them in a song I started
writing(posted some of it in the guitar zone).
They are kind of weird I think.Well here goes:

Fast too fast
can't hold up
linear all to linear
Wrong key
why did the door open
Prophecy fortold
not inevitable (yet somehow)
Kill the seagull
he only causes problems anyway
His departure-My salvation
Hollow eyes
Life transcends death
as progression in reverse
Sorry for this
No Retribution
No Retribution
Words in vain
The rain won't stop
Normal ,what is normal?
Noone is
You psychotic naked fools!
Our electric circuits malfunction
Tell me something new
Our cybertime ends
At least it's not raining
I am Alive!
Does it fit your mind?
Destroy the ozon layer
No Redemption
No Redemption
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Old 2004-09-02, 00:23
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Is it random stuff or is there a metaphor behind it? It's pretty off-the-wall but I suppose in a fast paced flashy piece it might work.
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Old 2004-09-02, 08:48
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*nod*

could work great with a trashy anthrax kinda song, I like the title too. not much imagination but catchy..
 
Old 2004-09-02, 10:34
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Yeah, Anthrax would be perfect. I was trying to remember the song RHCP did that had the rapid fire lyric. I don't remember if it was "Californication" but that's what I'd thought of last night. I think Anthrax would be a better sound though. (Since I like them better !!) Hmm, something like The Prophet Song by Queen would sound cool with his ,too.
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-wally: Mom, you shouldn't play after me because it makes you sound even worse than you already do. -wally:*grumbles and whispers quietly* I guess it's cuz I love you or something, but you're still a TURD
Grimm:I could read your mind but its in font size .5
Amadeus:Oh, and was there a cesserole (never mind spelling) involved?
Paddy:the fact that you didn't end up on a kids show makes me question my atheism
Dyldo: You evil strumpet!
 
Old 2004-09-03, 21:42
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Some of the stuff have a meaning but most
of them don't.You think
of funny stuff when you're stoned(especially
without smoking!).
For music I was thinking something
like Canvas or DEP.
Thanks for taking the time to read it!
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