Please tell me wat you think about this song i Wrote lyrics music Etc..

dist guitar -intro ---------------------------
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--------4-----4-4----------------
--------3-----3-3----------------
--------2-----2-2----------------
-00000-1-000-1-1----------------

fades into acoustics ------------
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--4--------
--4---------
--2---------

Acoustic rythym 1- I havent determined how manytimes to play this
--------0------------0-----------0------------0----
----6-----------6----------6------------6----------
O ------0------------0----------0------------0-----O
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O --5----------5----------5------------5-----------O
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Solo/ melody-over acoustic rythym
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--6---6-----5--5-----3--3----1----6----6---5-----5---3-----3--1------
--------------------------------------5--------3---------1------------
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---5--5----5---5------3--3---0----5--------3---------1---------0-----
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lyrics over acoustic rythym section 1-
-Verse.-
Self____ transgression of comity
void____ congregation in placid lace
Bleak___ Empty and desolate
Pre-chorus.
acoustic gtr.
comfort and virtue, graven image from above
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----------0-----------------0----------------------------
-------5----------------5--------------5---------5--------4 3
----7---------------7---------------5---------5---------4----- 3
--0-----------0--6--------------6-----------5--------4--------3


Chorus dist. Gtr.

comfort in lonliness
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---------------------------2-/-/--/-/-/---------------
--4-------3---------------0-/-/--/-/-/---------------
--4-------0-------0-------2-/-/--/-/-/---------------
--2-------2-------2---1---2-/-/--/-/-/---------------
--2-------3-------3---2---0-/-/--/-/-/----------------


for the coming december
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---------------------------2-/-/--/-----------------
--4-------3---------------0-/-/--/-----------------
--4-------0-------0-------2-/-/--/--8-5--7-5----------
--2-------2-------2---1---2-/-/--/------------6W-----
--2-------3-------3---2---0-/-/--/------------------


Verse 2.
Sin____ virtuous pasts
Cold____ sin in my memory
Prayer__ escape from thy life

Repeat. Pre-chorus
Repeat. Chorus

Verse 3.
Sermon____ undying fate
Covenant just to keep them live
Birth____ Burden of sin {into 3nd chorus}

Interlude.
Dist GTR. 1
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---4-------2-------4-------5-----6------
---4-------2-------4-------5-----6-------
---2-------3-------5-------6-----7-------
I
I Dist GTR. X3
---------------------------------------------0---------Into outro
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--o---------------------------------------o---0------------
--o---------------------------------------o---2--------------
------5-4-2---5-4-2---6-5-3--6-5---7-6------2---------------
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outro-picked triplets
--------------------------------------------------12-15--14-12 11 12 10
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-------------------3-2-0--3-2-0------------------------------
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im goimg to try to fit a solo in during the outro in in between verses

Nobody can play a tab with no timing in it of a song they've never heard before. Transcribe it in PowerTab or some similar program, you will get a MUCH better response.

I should also point out that you need to post that in a monospaced font (I prefer Courier New) before anybody can actually read it at all.

He is very right.

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