Hey Everyone, this is a tribute song to the Punisher. I'm going to try get it recorded and then I will try and send it to this Punisher video game contest where they will choose someone's music to play during the game. The song is VERY fast with a Slayer type tempo. It would be a missing Raining Blood track because it is only two minutes and thirty seconds. Enjoy everyone. I hope you can hear it on the video game.

Die Criminal Scum


Tried to end my Life of War
After Vietnam
But everything changes when
My family's killed by the mob
Now my gun goes to the scum
I plan to kill them all
And I may be dammed for life
But I'll kill them til I fall

Clad in black white skull on chest
Fill my victims with fear
I target every criminal
They die when they are near
My guns blaze and bullets fly
As bodies all fall down
And I will keep up my work
Until I'm six feet under ground

I don't feel love, pain, or fear
Emotions are all gone
You cannot reason with me
You shouldn't have done your wrong
Send your goons, your guns, your cash
Every thing you've got
I'll cut through and leave a trail of blood
You'll die by my gun shot

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Not too bad. It took a second read to get the flow, and I'm not familiar with Punisher other that just hearing of it. This did offer a bit of description t hough so I got some of the idea of it. Wording wasn't bad and flow had a meter to it so that was cool. I got a bit of a paper melody from the rhythm.
Good luck with it !! It's good exposure anyways. Keep it up and who knows what will happen. Do you have an mp3 of it or anything?

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This one is also on www.purevolume.com/glaive

I replaced Way of Life(due to it's shitastic quality) with the song (called Die Criminal Scum), and another one Maximum Vigilance. Die has better quality than Maximum though. Enjoy.

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*snore*

I bet you listen to Korn and paint your nails, don't you? Here is some advice:

GROW THE FUCK UP.

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Oh, and I almost never tell people that their music sucks, but you might want to consider getting someone else to sing. You sound worse than Dave Mustaine on "Dawn Patrol."

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First of all, I don't think anyone can sound worse than Dave Mustaine on Dawn Patrol.

Second, I am actually happy for my own vocals on this recording. Any other thing I had, I would agree with you on and thank you for having the balls to say it.

Third, the lyrics are fucking fiction. I ain't bitching about my own life or any shit like that. It is about Frank Castle losing his family to the mob so he decides to kill crime. Thats why I use the first person so much and write it so literal. So DON'T tie me into a fucking Korn fan.

Thats why you thought I listened to Korn and painted my nails right? Because the lyrics were direct and totally first person? At least I didn't say fuck at all in it. At least there wasn't some catchy chorus. If the lyrics suck, just say they fucking suck and don't make a goddammed opinion about me.

Also if anybody put money on your bet that I listen to Korn and paint my nails, and was betting against you, you would lose your money. My fingers have never touched the wet end of goddammed paint brush my entire life.

Finally there is a thing called constructive critisism so here is some advice back at you.

GROW THE FUCK UP.

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No, I just think the lyrics are childish. And I'm not singling you out. Gore lyrics are stupid in any context. And don't bitch at me. When you post your lyrics, you run the risk of getting someone like me with something called an opinion, and the balls to not care about someone's feelings. I'm ending this here. Its stupid to argue about it.

And while I meant the insult, don't take it to heart. Jeez.

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Ah, fuck it, to each his own right?

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