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2004-08-17, 00:10
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By request.... I've never done this before
I wrote this piece and posted it at my forum and then someone said I should do a murderous version cuz it was too mushy. He was only joking , but I like what happened. He did , too ! I thought you guys might like to read them .
(untitled love song)
Ah, there's something about your eyes
That makes my heart feel light
And there's something about the way
You smile when you kiss me goodnight
Words cannot describe the way
You make me feel inside
There's something special that I feel
And I don't want to hide...
Those perfect angel-sung melodies I hear when you are near
And the way clouds leave to show the sky so blue and so clear
One look from you is all it takes to melt my heart away
And I never thought I'd feel inside the way I feel today
So come into my arms my love and share this feeling with me
We'll take the world by storm like nothing they've ever seen
We may not be much to the outside world
But to me you're all I need
Ah, there's something about your eyes
That makes my heart feel light
And there's something about the way
You smile when you kiss me goodnight
Words cannot describe the way
You make me feel inside
There's something special that I feel
And I don't want to hide...
There's just something so special that I feel.
BJH
( And the other version )
Ah, there's something about your eyes
That makes my heart feel tight
And there's something about the way
You smile that angers me day and night
Words cannot describe the way
You make me feel inside
There's something grotesque that I feel
that I can no longer hide...
Those perfect dirges I hear when you are near
And the way clouds snow and show the blackest sky so clear
One look from you and all I want to do is take your heart away
And I never thought I'd feel inside the way I feel today
So come into my arms my love and share this feeling with me
I'll leave your bloody corpse like nothing they've ever seen
You may have no taste to the outside world
But you'll be that on which I feed.
Ah, there's something about your eyes
That makes my heart feel tight
And there's something about the way
You smile that angers me day and night
Words cannot describe the way
You make me feel inside
There's something grotesque that I feel
that I can no longer hide...
There's just something so special that I feel.
(BURP!)
BJH
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-wally: Mom, you shouldn't play after me because it makes you sound even worse than you already do. -wally:*grumbles and whispers quietly* I guess it's cuz I love you or something, but you're still a TURD
Grimm:I could read your mind but its in font size .5
Amadeus:Oh, and was there a cesserole (never mind spelling) involved?
Paddy:the fact that you didn't end up on a kids show makes me question my atheism
Dyldo: You evil strumpet!
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2004-08-21, 20:45
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Bump!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Is everyone dead out there ??????
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-wally: Mom, you shouldn't play after me because it makes you sound even worse than you already do. -wally:*grumbles and whispers quietly* I guess it's cuz I love you or something, but you're still a TURD
Grimm:I could read your mind but its in font size .5
Amadeus:Oh, and was there a cesserole (never mind spelling) involved?
Paddy:the fact that you didn't end up on a kids show makes me question my atheism
Dyldo: You evil strumpet!
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2004-08-21, 21:13
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bugfucker strikes back.
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*clap clap clap*
Better than anything I'll ever write. Good job, metal mom.
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The one time I go to check this thread, it mentions me getting fucked by a dude.
Awesome.
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2004-08-22, 01:17
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Post-whore
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I like it. If I were writing it I would have saved everything to the very end. Something like the last line being...
There's something grotesque that I feel
that I can no longer hide...
When I drag your body to a field
and feast upon your hyde
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2004-08-22, 09:02
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FUCKING HOFF-STYLE!!!!!!!
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Originally Posted by Corpsevomit98
I like it. If I were writing it I would have saved everything to the very end. Something like the last line being...
There's something grotesque that I feel
that I can no longer hide...
When I drag your body to a field
and feast upon your hyde
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BAHAHAHAHAHHAHA!
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2004-08-22, 18:55
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Hey, I like that ! It doesn't quite fit withthe same pattern as the original which I was trying to do but I did like that. Hmmm......
metal mom, that cracks me up . And thanks , guys.
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My eldest son's bipolar website: www.bipolarmanifesto.com
-wally: Mom, you shouldn't play after me because it makes you sound even worse than you already do. -wally:*grumbles and whispers quietly* I guess it's cuz I love you or something, but you're still a TURD
Grimm:I could read your mind but its in font size .5
Amadeus:Oh, and was there a cesserole (never mind spelling) involved?
Paddy:the fact that you didn't end up on a kids show makes me question my atheism
Dyldo: You evil strumpet!
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2004-08-24, 13:32
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bugfucker strikes back.
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Location: 19713, Delaware
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Welcome, Metal Mom. 
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Originally Posted by Nihilist
The one time I go to check this thread, it mentions me getting fucked by a dude.
Awesome.
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