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2004-08-13, 01:40
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corny love poem
title says it all, but it has a special meaning to me and the one i love/loved.
Flowing in a precious ocean,
opened by a cold emotion.
Gaze into my eyes once more,
such a passive lover's adore.
Calmness is dripping from your eyes,
tears of happyness not of lies.
Hear the words slide off my lips,
poison of the gripping heart sips.
Smiles warm the newly emptied heart,
memories we loved again slowly restart.
Running a filmstrip in our minds,
as our past slowly unwinds.
Souls and hearts are forever entwined,
crawling around us like vines.
Our happyness can live once again,
for true love will always win..
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2004-08-13, 02:46
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HES BAAACK
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i take it youre a white nationalist?
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2004-08-13, 04:22
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no
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2004-08-13, 11:04
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Life is pain.
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i only got passed, like, the first 8 words.
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2004-08-13, 14:50
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HES BAAACK
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why do you have 88 in your name
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2004-08-13, 18:38
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random number?
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2004-08-13, 20:16
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Um...I like your avatar.
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2004-08-13, 20:30
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HES BAAACK
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nobody just chooses 88 as a random number, dumbass
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2004-08-14, 01:50
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Life is pain.
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why not?
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2004-08-14, 02:29
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HES BAAACK
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because, you just dont. H= 8th letter of alphabet.
88=HH
figure it out yet?
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2004-08-14, 03:12
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dude, i choose stupid random numbers all the time, like -
oh man you shoulda been at 101 dalmations, there were like, 88 dogs in that movie!
but either way this is the worst argument ive ever had.
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2004-08-14, 13:36
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well if hes a white nationalist he should be proud about it and not be a little sissy. its common knowledge 88=heil hitler, like 69=sex position, 420=national smoke day
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2004-08-15, 04:10
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After all the constructive critizism already given, by our own genius' here at metaltabs, infinity and transient, I don't know if this will add too much but...
I didn't mind it. Nice flow. Descriptive writing. If it means something to you and your loved one, then that is all that matters.
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2004-08-15, 04:49
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I never claimed to be a genius. I dont even know why the fuck we are talking about numbers anyway. I was just arguing with transient  |
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2004-08-15, 16:17
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lol arguing for the sake of arguing \m/
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