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Old 2004-08-07, 04:03
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MoonRaven
Lo, they do call to me...
 
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i see you there
in every shadow
every cloud
your face staring back at me
memories of what used to be
eyes turned in disgust
wasn't i enough
my love, compassion, every waking hour
all for you, all in vain
tearing at my soul with every word
the more you speak, the more i die
every false confession of love further
drives the stake through my heart
a fool i was to try to satisfy you
a pit of vanity, a succubus in the flesh
and with a final breath
i am yours
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Old 2004-08-09, 21:54
Incantation
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That was elequintly Dark, and depressing..I liked the lumination on your melancholy on this poem. Dont ever remember reading any of your old stuff, but this was really good...

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Old 2004-08-11, 00:34
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powersofterror
I am a tax on the world..
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The best poems don't have names.
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Old 2004-08-12, 15:53
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Lo, they do call to me...
 
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That was elequintly Dark, and depressing..I liked the lumination on your melancholy on this poem. Dont ever remember reading any of your old stuff, but this was really good...


some of my older stuff is along these lines, some is gore death metal type shit, some is type o negative, tongue in cheek depressing.
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