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2004-07-29, 23:59
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I am a tax on the world..
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Infinity
Infinity
Face us you will die by our hands
Everlasting fate brought to you
Can't stop it now this killer faction
Hate has come here to take you
Deeds of now and then will be joined
Cut you down and pick you up again
It will never stop this killer faction
Until the genocide has won
Kill the humans and its nature
So the barren fires and napalm
May burn and consume this planet
You will not live to the morrow
Kill you and betray you until
The day, we are ever more hahahaha
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Man, I get real sweaty after I wack my dong. Yeah, cause I headbang while I do, and I can't really "Jump" (haha ) like VanHalen in a dorm room, so I just walk back and forth....haha a couple days ago I was jumping up and down on my bed, with my pants down and my roommate came in when I wasn't looking, hahaha.
 
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2004-08-01, 09:26
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dsnt trust ne1 < 30
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Gotta love maniacal laughter !!   Not bad but didn't grab me. Didn't seem as 'poetic' as some of your other pieces.
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-wally: Mom, you shouldn't play after me because it makes you sound even worse than you already do. -wally:*grumbles and whispers quietly* I guess it's cuz I love you or something, but you're still a TURD
Grimm:I could read your mind but its in font size .5
Amadeus:Oh, and was there a cesserole (never mind spelling) involved?
Paddy:the fact that you didn't end up on a kids show makes me question my atheism
Dyldo: You evil strumpet!
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2004-08-01, 09:37
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Life is pain.
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2004-08-01, 09:54
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I like it... Well, i like what it's about, im not sure if i like the actual poem, i should probably think about it after i get some sleep. 
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We live thinking we will never die.
We die thinking we had never lived.
Cut it out.
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2004-08-02, 00:56
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I am a tax on the world..
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I only liked it because it was done by syllables, but thanks anyways.
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Man, I get real sweaty after I wack my dong. Yeah, cause I headbang while I do, and I can't really "Jump" (haha ) like VanHalen in a dorm room, so I just walk back and forth....haha a couple days ago I was jumping up and down on my bed, with my pants down and my roommate came in when I wasn't looking, hahaha.
This is my band's page
http://www.myspace.com/ferocitydentontx
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2004-08-02, 13:23
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HES BAAACK
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die! by my hand! we creep across the land! killing first born ...man?
might want to change the first line
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2004-08-03, 00:49
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OK, i've read it again, it doesnt really tickle my fancy, but i've got to log of now cos im in class, so i'll edit my post when i have more time
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