here are lyrics to a song my band is working on...being how they are lyrics, it doesn't flow as well as a real poem would, but fuck it, these are lyrics damnit!! (try screaming in a death metal voice to get the right feel)

FRAGMENT OF TIME

It runs out
This misleading
Fragment of time
We live
The season’s pass
In putrid corrosion
Rupture the earth
In death

Extend the surface, to catch the rain
Evaporate, into my breath
Rotting inside, to justify the pain
Run from the, life that’s been left
It will transform, into itself
Shadows grow, while life withers
The sound of tried tears, carried through dead air
Emptiness bestowed, there is nothing

A foggy path
Under a blood-soaked canopy
There's no turning back
Brutal misery

A foggy path
Under a blood-soaked canopy
Emptiness bestowed
There is nothing


Fragment of Time
Chris Humeniuk
July 2004

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Well, when you Screamgrowl them, they are pretty good. But its hard to judge lyrics without actually hearing the instruments aswell. You never know how they will fit in

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you'll just have to trust me on it fitting.

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I don't trust anyone... but if im being ordered to by a forum leader, then i guess i'd better do it... just this once though

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Forum leaders don't mean shit. It just means they kiss the ass of Nomad...thats it. Now if they got paid they wouldn't be such push overs.

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You need a spanking before your ritalin

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i got a free shirt out of it

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I haven't worn mine yet, hahaha