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2004-07-23, 09:51
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The Haunting Moon
the haunting moon enlightened by traces of evil rises
deep crevices forming grim faces and lunatical looks
your heart evaporates in its presence and your mind numbs
consumed by the moon's daemon messages you respond to its every command
an army of zombies rises as the moon takes lead
revenge on Day is at hand
purging Day's beauty with inhumane attacks
soon the moon is discovered by the rays of the fire giant
hiding to live and destroy again
your body is unchained from the moon's messages and you awake
good morning...
wrote this also while in Europe...hope you like?
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2004-07-23, 10:05
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Just wondering... What the Fuck were you smoking when you wrote that? 
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2004-07-23, 11:19
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*laughs at above comment* nah, hehehe, it's good. It flows nicely. It's weird, and it does sound like something this friend of mine would write whilst high... 
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2004-07-23, 16:48
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not high at all I was just listening to some metal while in the lobby of a hotel and it just popped into my head. Kind of inspired by the opening line of "Funeral Thirst" by The Black Dahlia Murder. "The Full Moon light entrances me, it calls me forth, yet I have not the strength to move"
anyways good stuff.
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2004-07-24, 12:21
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But why is the rum gone ?
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not bad dude
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2004-07-24, 12:22
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I like his other one better.
It needs more about raping the pope though
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2004-07-24, 19:01
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i stick to pagan symbolism and viking mythology when writing poems. It flows easier. Good song for raping the pope or something like that is Anti-Anti Christ by GWAR. One of the funniest bands I think around. Anyways yeah give that song a shot if you'd like.
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2004-07-25, 18:03
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But why is the rum gone ?
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gwar suks man.....completely hate that bad....absolutely nothing is good about that band
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2004-07-26, 03:17
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if you take them serious you won't like them. But yeah I can understand though. Oh well.
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