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2004-07-20, 23:51
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I am a tax on the world..
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Fortune and Glory
Hey, LBXXX, I just had to let you know...yesterday I got a mail saying I am a "semi-finalist" in this poetry contest that I entered in actually as a joke. Well, It's now being published in a book along with a ton of others. This sounds almost too good to be true and I hope it's not a scam, but anyways, I ordered the book. I'm really wondering if it is a scam (this is done by Famous Poets Society if you feel like checking it out) or I wasted 30 bucks.
Aside from that, I wrote this this morning.
Fortune and Glory
Of what it was
Of what it can be
Can not come hither
Together and free
If you ask it of me
To light the wax
To sing a slow tune
Worthy of you
Caressed my soul
It was only a dream
No longer real
Together and free
I cannot be there
To live with you
I will not bring
It unto you
It will not be lit
This life to sing
Of what was once
Known to thee
Now what is dead
Will blow onto thee
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Man, I get real sweaty after I wack my dong. Yeah, cause I headbang while I do, and I can't really "Jump" (haha ) like VanHalen in a dorm room, so I just walk back and forth....haha a couple days ago I was jumping up and down on my bed, with my pants down and my roommate came in when I wasn't looking, hahaha.
 
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2004-07-21, 00:36
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Hey, I hope it works out for you. Good luck with it! If they start asking you for too much money though beware.
I liked this. It was melancholy and had a nice flow like you always do. I could hear it spoken. Nice. 
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2004-07-21, 00:50
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Man, I get real sweaty after I wack my dong. Yeah, cause I headbang while I do, and I can't really "Jump" (haha ) like VanHalen in a dorm room, so I just walk back and forth....haha a couple days ago I was jumping up and down on my bed, with my pants down and my roommate came in when I wasn't looking, hahaha.
This is my band's page
http://www.myspace.com/ferocitydentontx
Last edited by powersofterror : 2004-07-21 at 00:59.
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2004-07-21, 13:31
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Another short lined piece. Pretty cool. How did you come up withthat title though? I've heard all kinds of stories about that sight. Have you had much experience with them?
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My eldest son's bipolar website: www.bipolarmanifesto.com
-wally: Mom, you shouldn't play after me because it makes you sound even worse than you already do. -wally:*grumbles and whispers quietly* I guess it's cuz I love you or something, but you're still a TURD
Grimm:I could read your mind but its in font size .5
Amadeus:Oh, and was there a cesserole (never mind spelling) involved?
Paddy:the fact that you didn't end up on a kids show makes me question my atheism
Dyldo: You evil strumpet!
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2004-07-21, 19:16
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I am a tax on the world..
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No, not really. The title, hehe...I was think of ducks at the time I guess. But the title was a little joke about ducks at a pond eating bread that the old people throw in, and "I" got sick from it.
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Man, I get real sweaty after I wack my dong. Yeah, cause I headbang while I do, and I can't really "Jump" (haha ) like VanHalen in a dorm room, so I just walk back and forth....haha a couple days ago I was jumping up and down on my bed, with my pants down and my roommate came in when I wasn't looking, hahaha.
This is my band's page
http://www.myspace.com/ferocitydentontx
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2004-07-21, 21:05
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Hey Powers good shit as usual, i always enjoy reading your stuff.
One thing i noticed though, the last lines of this one you just wrote "Fortune and GLory" are exactly the same as the last lines in "I'll Never Eat Bread Again..". Is this just coincedence or was there a reason for it?
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2004-07-22, 02:16
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No reason,  , I wrote one and the other went well with the same line so I used it again.
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Man, I get real sweaty after I wack my dong. Yeah, cause I headbang while I do, and I can't really "Jump" (haha ) like VanHalen in a dorm room, so I just walk back and forth....haha a couple days ago I was jumping up and down on my bed, with my pants down and my roommate came in when I wasn't looking, hahaha.
This is my band's page
http://www.myspace.com/ferocitydentontx
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