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2004-07-17, 20:06
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A love made in hell
Behold thy undying beauty unmatched by mortal flesh
I wish only to sever the chords that bestow life upon you
A lustful red to wash over your untainted body
The soothing corruption of death unleashing a miasmic breath
Our love everlasting will carry us through the bowels of earth
And unto thee shall be placed the throne of the ninth circle
Crowned upon thee a tiara of the tortured souls you’ve claimed
Oh my dying succubus let me rest damned forever by your side
Let me but drink from thy fountain of vampiric blood
You the unholy witch who will sieze for us the throne of evil
Together we shall reign as death upon the living
In the undying love of death we shall forever be one
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2004-07-17, 21:54
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This is brilliant  it's about turning someone else into a vampire, right? I'm not mistaken? *gets everyone in this empty room to do the mexican wave*
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2004-07-17, 23:14
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I guess I'm too old or read too many of these, but they make me yawn.
"Our love everlasting will carry us through the bowels of earth" that sounded like one HELLACIOUS shit to me. I'm sorry. It's pretty well worded and structurally sound but I wouldn't buy it or dwld it unless it had some very intriguing music to it. But I bet you could get a good epic piece going the way you use words.
Bela Lugosi is THE only vampiric creature there'll ever be for me.
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-wally: Mom, you shouldn't play after me because it makes you sound even worse than you already do. -wally:*grumbles and whispers quietly* I guess it's cuz I love you or something, but you're still a TURD
Grimm:I could read your mind but its in font size .5
Amadeus:Oh, and was there a cesserole (never mind spelling) involved?
Paddy:the fact that you didn't end up on a kids show makes me question my atheism
Dyldo: You evil strumpet!
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2004-07-18, 00:54
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well i wasn't going for originallity here really. But thanks for the psuedo complimant i guess.
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2004-07-18, 01:00
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Well I like it, and L,B'XXX is right about you being able to write an epic piece... You've got talent with words, do you have a band you write for, or...?
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2004-07-18, 02:36
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Trying to start one. Im good with a death metal voice, and getting better with a black metal voice, but it kills my fucking throat to do that shit. Unfortunatley there's not many people in my area that play instruments and like metal.
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2004-07-18, 03:08
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Yeah, it's the same where I live.
My friend also plays guitar, my sister's a bass player, i know a drummer, but we're all into different music therefore if we were to become a band we would play a weird genre of metal(me)/punk(friend)/david bowie (nettie's obsessed)/nu metal(sister)
It's just not going to happen, hehe
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2004-07-18, 16:11
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I am a tax on the world..
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I liked it.
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Man, I get real sweaty after I wack my dong. Yeah, cause I headbang while I do, and I can't really "Jump" (haha ) like VanHalen in a dorm room, so I just walk back and forth....haha a couple days ago I was jumping up and down on my bed, with my pants down and my roommate came in when I wasn't looking, hahaha.
 
This is my band's page
http://www.myspace.com/ferocitydentontx
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