this is pretty sick, check it out.
The darkened shrine of my spawning arises once again
Mankind is nearing its end, as the moon turns red
The days light’s extinguished as the sun goes black
Clouds of blood will flood the land
As pestilence destroys any hope for the living
Hordes of my demon slaves cut down human resistance
The dead rising soon after to join my legions of hatred

My revival is near as mankind dwindles in numbers
My horde is full strength and the blood flows free
Black arts and witches magic are united for my summoning
As the holy seal of my prison crumbles
The last churches burn to the ground
Only to be replaced by black palaces of hatred
The time draws near, as the last of mankind is obliterated

Lava spews from a boiling ocean of disease
Waves of blood cover the land
All things alive have been tortured and mutilated
All things good have been adulterated with sin
The seven circles of hell have aligned
And the time for my coming is now
There is no hope, no safe place for you

NICE. i like the powerful words...they convey your point so much more than the meanings behind the words.

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whoa....thats some good shit there good........i wish i could think up of lyrics like that

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Thank you both, it's nice to be complemented on your work. I hope to get more up here soon.

It had the very common words of lyrics of this type I've read here. It did flow well and you used your words well. How ever it didn't have anything to jump out and bite me to get my attention lyrically.
I'm not knocking your writing because this shows you are capable of doing some imaginative work, but I'd like to see you push yourself a little harder and get some unique imagery or action in it.
Please, no maimed virgins. They make me yawn.

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