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2004-06-28, 22:35
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"Haunt Me in My Dreams"
Okay, I'm going through a torch song phase right now. A couple people said I wasn't writing from my inner self on my last one so maybe this will be a bit better. The paper melody I'm getting is minor keyed with lots of emotion, swells and flows.
" Haunt Me in My Dreams "
There was laughter that we shared
When we were together
And a hint of summer blue
Even as the frosty snowflakes fell
You and I could have taken the world
And made it our own
But that was a very long time ago
Yes, such a very long time ago
Right now I find it hard to see
As the rain is coming down
In sheets against the glass
Trying to wash away my pain
But I know there will come a day
I'll look back and say
That in mind and spirit we'd always be one
Forever in our hearts we'd be as one
(Chorus)
I soak my pillow remembering walks together
And the tender way you looked into my eyes
I'll try to sleep to give myself some peace
But I know you'll haunt me in my dreams
Yes, forever you will haunt me in my dreams
Yes, please, haunt me forever in my dreams
Do you remember when we saw the sunrise over the mountains
And the rushing of the river down below
Do you remember wishing on the stars at night
And the crackling as we sat by fire's glow
Please, believe me when I tell you that I'm sorry
But not sorry for the times we tried to share
And believe me when I say I'll always hold you dear
In my heart a part of yours will always burn
(Chorus)
I soak my pillow remembering walks together
And the tender way you looked into my eyes
I'll try to sleep to give myself some peace
But I know you'll haunt me in my dreams
Yes, forever you will haunt me in my dreams
Yes, please, haunt me forever in my dreams
BJH
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-wally: Mom, you shouldn't play after me because it makes you sound even worse than you already do. -wally:*grumbles and whispers quietly* I guess it's cuz I love you or something, but you're still a TURD
Grimm:I could read your mind but its in font size .5
Amadeus:Oh, and was there a cesserole (never mind spelling) involved?
Paddy:the fact that you didn't end up on a kids show makes me question my atheism
Dyldo: You evil strumpet!
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2004-06-28, 22:41
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I am a tax on the world..
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Not bad.
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Man, I get real sweaty after I wack my dong. Yeah, cause I headbang while I do, and I can't really "Jump" (haha ) like VanHalen in a dorm room, so I just walk back and forth....haha a couple days ago I was jumping up and down on my bed, with my pants down and my roommate came in when I wasn't looking, hahaha.
 
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2004-06-29, 00:30
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THERE WE GO! now we're talkin' that's you. keep it that way. don't make any changes
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Crying from the womb, I’m hating you
Burning from the pain, I chase after you,
Seething from the fake, I’m catching you,
Chasing after ghosts, I’m killing you.
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2004-06-29, 01:28
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Thanks guys. Glad you liked it.
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My eldest son's bipolar website: www.bipolarmanifesto.com
-wally: Mom, you shouldn't play after me because it makes you sound even worse than you already do. -wally:*grumbles and whispers quietly* I guess it's cuz I love you or something, but you're still a TURD
Grimm:I could read your mind but its in font size .5
Amadeus:Oh, and was there a cesserole (never mind spelling) involved?
Paddy:the fact that you didn't end up on a kids show makes me question my atheism
Dyldo: You evil strumpet!
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2004-06-30, 23:51
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I think I'm crying.............
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2004-07-02, 00:17
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 I've never heard that about one of my pieces. Thanks !
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My eldest son's bipolar website: www.bipolarmanifesto.com
-wally: Mom, you shouldn't play after me because it makes you sound even worse than you already do. -wally:*grumbles and whispers quietly* I guess it's cuz I love you or something, but you're still a TURD
Grimm:I could read your mind but its in font size .5
Amadeus:Oh, and was there a cesserole (never mind spelling) involved?
Paddy:the fact that you didn't end up on a kids show makes me question my atheism
Dyldo: You evil strumpet!
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