2004-06-24, 22:48
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Lo, they do call to me...
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i havent named it yet
hours pass waiting for you
feels like an enternity
i see your face in the clouds
your eyes in the stars
your voice in my dreams
tearing at my sanity
my waking hours
nothing more than a pause
from the dreamscape that is reality
where is my remedy
my escape
my freedom
from what i have become
a scar on the earth
a parasite
leeching off what isnt there
where is my closure
my release
my finality
the end of thought
of you
of me
of what never was
what never is
what never was meant to be
what dreams have made real
and what truth has never been
any ideas?
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2004-06-24, 23:05
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HES BAAACK
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face in the clouds
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2004-06-25, 01:21
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I am a tax on the world..
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ha, that was cool, and trans's title works nicely. Unless you were looking for something more devilish.
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2004-06-25, 05:50
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Lo, they do call to me...
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trasients name is good, but its not the kind of name im looking for, i want something that will make you think
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2004-06-25, 12:47
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HES BAAACK
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i dont know,i cant think of anything else...
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2004-06-25, 14:24
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Scar of Forever.
not quite sure if that's what you're looking for, but i think it might fit.
i also think that this should be something you create, instead of coming to us, but that's okay, i liked the piece
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Crying from the womb, I知 hating you
Burning from the pain, I chase after you,
Seething from the fake, I知 catching you,
Chasing after ghosts, I知 killing you.
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2004-06-25, 15:21
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HES BAAACK
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yeah, i agree, it should come from you but its no biggy asking for help
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2004-06-25, 23:45
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dsnt trust ne1 < 30
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Sometimes someone's idea will spark something.
Pick a line and write it in Latin.
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My eldest son's bipolar website: www.bipolarmanifesto.com
-wally: Mom, you shouldn't play after me because it makes you sound even worse than you already do. -wally:*grumbles and whispers quietly* I guess it's cuz I love you or something, but you're still a TURD
Grimm:I could read your mind but its in font size .5
Amadeus:Oh, and was there a cesserole (never mind spelling) involved?
Paddy:the fact that you didn't end up on a kids show makes me question my atheism
Dyldo: You evil strumpet!
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2004-06-26, 00:25
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HES BAAACK
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os in nimbibus-face in the clouds i believe.
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2004-06-26, 18:30
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how could i be so blind? here's your title; "Die Dinge, die nie sind" it's German, it means, "The Things that Never Are"
i think that might fit, or something like that.
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Crying from the womb, I知 hating you
Burning from the pain, I chase after you,
Seething from the fake, I知 catching you,
Chasing after ghosts, I知 killing you.
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2004-06-27, 00:18
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dsnt trust ne1 < 30
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My eldest son's bipolar website: www.bipolarmanifesto.com
-wally: Mom, you shouldn't play after me because it makes you sound even worse than you already do. -wally:*grumbles and whispers quietly* I guess it's cuz I love you or something, but you're still a TURD
Grimm:I could read your mind but its in font size .5
Amadeus:Oh, and was there a cesserole (never mind spelling) involved?
Paddy:the fact that you didn't end up on a kids show makes me question my atheism
Dyldo: You evil strumpet!
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2004-06-27, 02:51
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HES BAAACK
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moon ravin'!!!hahahaha
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2004-06-27, 03:15
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STUFFED ANIMAL ORGY
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an endless traverse through the obscene
using big words ALWAYS makes it cooler
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2004-06-27, 03:40
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trapped in the sky??
lost above the clouds?
bleh
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