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Old 2004-06-05, 22:22
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Riff for a song I'm working on...

What do you think? Going for a kind of dark feel.
http://members.cox.net/sean_and_alicia/riffa-1.mp3
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Old 2004-06-05, 22:34
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to be honest, its a little predictable. change something other than the fret place ment...but it does sound pretty CoB ish
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Old 2004-06-05, 22:52
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Yeah, and I don't really get the dark feel.
 
Old 2004-06-05, 23:01
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to be honest, its a little predictable. change something other than the fret place ment...but it does sound pretty CoB ish

Yeah, if played for too long it could get boring, it will only make up about 15 seconds of the entire thing though. I could play around with a couple different patterns alternating to mix it up a bit.
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Old 2004-06-05, 23:13
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you should totally twist the expectations and end with a blues scale or something, maybe a chromatic run
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Old 2004-06-05, 23:28
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Wasn't bad.
But how did you get to post a mp3? I can't figure this out.
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Old 2004-06-05, 23:51
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its a link , not an attachment
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Old 2004-06-06, 00:03
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Yes, I know. What I ment was how do you get a website to host an mp3 like that?
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Old 2004-06-06, 00:07
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My internet provider gives me 10 meg of webspace. Most ISP's do.
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Old 2004-06-06, 00:10
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there are also hosting pages
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Old 2004-06-06, 00:12
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Yeah, 99% of them blow goat nads though.
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Old 2004-06-06, 00:25
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I'll eventually look for a good hosting site... Im just lazy
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Old 2004-06-06, 01:20
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Yes, I know. What I ment was how do you get a website to host an mp3 like that?


you asked this in atif's thread and i gave you some links...
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Old 2004-06-06, 09:50
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It would sound better with another guitar doing some rythm along with it i think.
 
Old 2004-06-06, 14:00
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How come your transfers take so long
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Old 2004-06-06, 14:38
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How come your transfers take so long

How long did it take? It shouldn't be slow, unless you're on a dial up or something.

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It would sound better with another guitar doing some rythm along with it i think.

Yeah, would sound alot better with drums and bass too, but it's just a 15 second part. I'll post more as I become happy with more of the parts for it. Thanks all for the constructive criticism.
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Old 2004-06-07, 04:46
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id think id be cool if the other guitar played that an octave down...well that just me, or just put a fat and chunky rhythm to it..
 
Old 2004-06-07, 06:01
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Here's part of the songs rhythm, I'm still working out the progressions.

http://members.cox.net/sean_and_alicia/riffa-3.mp3
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Old 2004-06-09, 15:43
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i think that the second riff was better than the first...






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Old 2004-06-17, 06:34
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It would sound better with another guitar doing some rythm along with it i think.


Yeah!... it's much better with at least two guitars....and some drums.......
 
Old 2004-06-17, 11:40
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Old 2004-06-17, 12:15
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Yeah, I'm not satisfied either, working on it. I need a couple more parts, I'll post it when it's done, with drums bass etc.
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Old 2004-06-17, 14:39
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Here's part of the songs rhythm, I'm still working out the progressions.

http://members.cox.net/sean_and_alicia/riffa-3.mp3


good shit

Didn't like the first riff you posted, the first 4 notes immediately made me think 'Embodiment - Carcass'

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