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Old 2004-05-19, 12:24
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SvarteDauden - No regrets!

SvarteDauden is my BM band, and here is some lyrics of a new song:

I killed an innocent man - I dont regret
I made a man take suicide - I dont regret
I fucked my friends wife - I dont regret

All my life Ive been doing this stuff, and I dont regret!!

I dont know if its gonna be like this, but ive made riff and the lyrics fits, so we'll see!
 
Old 2004-05-19, 13:08
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Anyone? Want to hear of what you think!
 
Old 2004-05-19, 13:10
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That's it?
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Old 2004-05-19, 14:00
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Hehe, no! Its alot more! But it was just the beginning and i wanted to know what you think! Ill add the rest later! What do you think of the lines that are added+
 
Old 2004-05-19, 14:57
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I'd have to see more of the words to give you any honest answer. So far there isn't much to go on.
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Old 2004-05-19, 19:38
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no, other than the thought "let's go be an idiot and sing about nothing" you could have something there if you develop it more. you could have something, but right now........not so much. keep reworking it. i like the format though, i use it all the time, the call------>response format, it's awesome.
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Old 2004-05-19, 20:40
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no, other than the thought "let's go be an idiot and sing about nothing" you could have something there if you develop it more. you could have something, but right now........not so much. keep reworking it. i like the format though, i use it all the time, the call------>response format, it's awesome.


Yeah, I can see it in your signature :P
 
Old 2004-05-19, 21:24
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hah. yeah, that's me. i guess it comes from my being brought up in a very very very conservative church where they did responsive readings everyday! he would say something, then we would say two lines, then he would say ten and so on and so on. yeah. good luck.
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Old 2004-05-20, 00:01
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ummmmymotherbeatyourmotherindominoooes....

Wally's dad's imitation of a Catholic mass in Latin. I couldn't resist...
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-wally: Mom, you shouldn't play after me because it makes you sound even worse than you already do. -wally:*grumbles and whispers quietly* I guess it's cuz I love you or something, but you're still a TURD
Grimm:I could read your mind but its in font size .5
Amadeus:Oh, and was there a cesserole (never mind spelling) involved?
Paddy:the fact that you didn't end up on a kids show makes me question my atheism
Dyldo: You evil strumpet!
 
Old 2004-05-20, 19:05
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NICE! i love it. who's wally? the guy from Dilbert?
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