2004-05-19, 05:53
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A metal track im writing
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2004-05-19, 08:17
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I'd really work on getting a much more solid guitar tone. Its really really fuzzy sounding. If you were able to get a crunchy sounding rhythm tone this song would sound a lot better.
Song gets a bit repetative though.
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2004-05-19, 13:29
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i just started it.....so who knows how it will work out..if that made sense..
fuck im stoned..
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2004-05-19, 13:32
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FUCKING HOFF-STYLE!!!!!!!
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Too much fuzz, less repetition.
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2004-05-19, 14:01
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I think you should get a more necro sound!
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2004-05-19, 14:46
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You are better off deciding your self, fint the sound you like and make it.
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2004-05-19, 20:22
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Yeah, it's way too repetitive, and somewhat not what I'd call original.
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2004-05-20, 01:59
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this song has serious potential, keep workin on it. Good rythm i love the double bass pedal work.
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2004-05-20, 04:16
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What drum machine are you using?? And what the hells up with all the goofy voices you use!! Thier funny as hell. The songs a bit repetitive but its catchy.
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2004-05-20, 05:07
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yeh its abit repetitive but i suppose having no vocals has something to do with that...
and i really cant help my guitar sound....i have a shitty les paul copy(mega cheap one) with the worst pick ups in the world....i used to own a jackson with emg 81's in it but i sold it and stopped playing guitar for a few years...so i just make do at this point in time..
how about some of you other guys post some of your work...
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2004-05-20, 05:08
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i use fruity loops for my drums....and my voice samples are all out of pornos..
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2004-05-20, 05:11
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ha ha ha @samples
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2004-05-20, 07:06
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pornos are a great source for vocal samples...cool edit pro 2 lets u rip the audio out of mpegs and avi's..
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2004-05-20, 18:42
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sweet i got losta those on mah computer so hopefully i could make a song too!!!
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2004-05-20, 21:21
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lmao pornos!
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2004-05-23, 19:46
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Quote:
Originally Posted by KB_CANS
how about some of you other guys post some of your work...
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A work in progress, based on the modes of C Harmonic Minor. Nothing serious yet, just noodling and finding bits and pieces.
http://members.cox.net/sean_and_ali...inor_improv.mp3
I like the rhythm in your track, it has potential. Your tone needs some work, but you already explained that.
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2004-05-23, 23:03
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yeh it sounds like you can play well Anubisxy...now just get creative and write a song.
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2004-05-23, 23:53
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Yeah, thanks, I really do need to get off my ass and get something. I guess what I really need is a band. Got TONS of riffs and licks, just need to tie em together in some serious jam sessions. Rock on.
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2004-05-24, 01:04
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yeh i need a band....at the moment im a one man band....i do the guitars, bass and the drums...
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