|
2004-05-17, 15:17
|
 |
Senior Metalhead
|
|
Join Date: Oct 2003
Location: Chicago,Il.
Posts: 367
|
|
|
METAMORPHASIZE
This one was written back in "98" by me and my friend Saverio. The music for this one is real heavy( dropped G) and has a few fast parts in it.
Metamorphasize
Dark night will reign upon us
Holy night will die in disgust
The mass will be my escape
Young virgin awaiting her rape
The mind is my weapon
My religion is what I agreed upon
Begin the sacrifice
Time to Metamorphasize
(Chorus)
Satan, come tonight
Satan, enter my soul
Satan will be in power
Satan is the light
Satan is, GOD!!!..
As I take the unholy dagger
and cut myself
I will spill the blood on the crucifix
I see my redness in my eyes evolve
and Hell starts to unfold
All paradise will be gone
I will desecrate the holy one
Repeat Chorus
The nights eclipse releases the souls of the dead
Evil being screams in me
Once, I was a human in reality
Now I've become the root of all evil
Hell is my place of eternity!!..
__________________
bestialson2003@yahoo.com
|
|
2004-05-17, 15:27
|
 |
Pirate Lawd
|
|
Join Date: May 2004
Location: Hanger 18
Posts: 6,520
|
|
Whoa! I thought my computer was going to burst into flames  |
|
2004-05-17, 20:31
|
|
Senior Metalhead
|
|
Join Date: Apr 2004
Location: Jax FL, previously lived in Naples Italy
Posts: 253
|
|
|
yeah, okay. that's cool. nice wording, if a little repetitive. but that's death metal isn't it? and that's cool. nice work man.
__________________
Crying from the womb, I’m hating you
Burning from the pain, I chase after you,
Seething from the fake, I’m catching you,
Chasing after ghosts, I’m killing you.
|
|
2004-05-17, 23:12
|
 |
dsnt trust ne1 < 30
|
|
Join Date: Jan 2003
Location: Home is where the <3 is
Posts: 8,881
|
|
|
I'm sorry. It might be cuz I'm old and half senile, but it reminded me too much of a B movie score. You've done much better than this, but that's a good thing since this is an older piece.
__________________
My eldest son's bipolar website: www.bipolarmanifesto.com
-wally: Mom, you shouldn't play after me because it makes you sound even worse than you already do. -wally:*grumbles and whispers quietly* I guess it's cuz I love you or something, but you're still a TURD
Grimm:I could read your mind but its in font size .5
Amadeus:Oh, and was there a cesserole (never mind spelling) involved?
Paddy:the fact that you didn't end up on a kids show makes me question my atheism
Dyldo: You evil strumpet!
|
|
2004-05-18, 15:34
|
|
Senior Metalhead
|
|
Join Date: Oct 2003
Location: Chicago,Il.
Posts: 367
|
|
Lol. Yeah, I should of added that I only wrote the last part of the beginning verse and the last part of the last verse. So, L'BXXX, yeah, old material, not a whole lot of flavor. This tune is just short to the point. It's evil, and Saverio(vocalist) flows with the music. Shit, I still have to find a way for you's to hear some of this music on here.
__________________
bestialson2003@yahoo.com
|
|
2004-05-18, 16:56
|
|
dsnt trust ne1 < 30
|
|
Join Date: Jan 2003
Location: Home is where the <3 is
Posts: 8,881
|
|
|
"This tune is just short to the point. " Yup, that it is. And since there's been a lot of evolution in this type lyric I think that's what hurt it for me. There wasn't the imaginative punch to make it more than an outline. I'm not being bitchy, just pointing out my ideas.
__________________
My eldest son's bipolar website: www.bipolarmanifesto.com
-wally: Mom, you shouldn't play after me because it makes you sound even worse than you already do. -wally:*grumbles and whispers quietly* I guess it's cuz I love you or something, but you're still a TURD
Grimm:I could read your mind but its in font size .5
Amadeus:Oh, and was there a cesserole (never mind spelling) involved?
Paddy:the fact that you didn't end up on a kids show makes me question my atheism
Dyldo: You evil strumpet!
|
Posting Rules
|
You may not post new threads
You may not post replies
You may not post attachments
You may not edit your posts
HTML code is Off
|
|
|
|
Authorized 