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Old 2004-05-04, 18:13
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BestialWarrior
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INDEPENDANCE DAY

I wrote this one back in 95' when I first saw a preview of the movie, and I made this up. This is a tune of the project "Black Earth". I'm looking around for the tape, cause what I'll try to do is record tape to cd. This is more or less a story, no realy poetry to it. I was thinking really evil that day.lol.

INDEPENDANCE DAY

Beware! The aliens are coming!

The war has just begun
Satisfaction by space has won
The devil between Earth and another dimension,
a bloody feud to encounter with.

Death Sentence! By war it is a sign,
Manipulation! In there it means you will die
Beware! the wrath of aliens
Creatures from another dimension are here to rule
by destruction
Technically, the Earth is destroyed
devastated, damaged by the aliens
The war has officially begun...

(Chorus)
Suffering humans in an altered state
Free themselves from the pain
A truly death defying day
Judgement day becomes Independance day!

Call upon the wrath of satan
He will burn the sky
And Earth will become Black Earth
with demons rising from hell
feasting upon the alien souls

Satan will have his way
the followers of the satanic church make an evil sign

A vortex is created in the air
calling upon the home of satan
the eyes of satan appear!

Mystical forces surround the Earth
God no longer has control
The Earth becomes enraged
and the portal of hell is opening...
(solo:Steve)
Satan rises out of dark ash
from the ground underneath
The preachers of the dark lord
call upon his wrath, to destroy
the alienatic souls
and to take their souls to join the gates of hell

Repeat Chorus

The united forces ain't doing a thing
The wrath of satan has proven fame
Judgement day has become hell's way
of a death-defying matyr!
Hell, the vicinity, the slaughter,
the massacre will last..
Forever!!!..

End.

Note: boy, what repetitive words and such. I didn't
realize back then how much repeating I did.
Now, looking back at this, I would change probably every verse,
and maybe one or two words in the chorus.
Either way, I just wanted to post this for the hell of it and get
your views on it. I'll admit this is not my best tune.lol.
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Old 2004-05-04, 20:45
dying-oath
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Location: Jax FL, previously lived in Naples Italy
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"Beware! The aliens are coming!" i'm sorry dude, i just found this really funny, i'm not sure if you're tryin' to be funny, but that's pretty high up there on the dumb/stupid but funny side (no offense meant)
it was cool overall though. nice job. it describes the movie very well (could i say something more inane?)
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