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Old 2004-04-27, 00:09
bleakmelancholy
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Ephemeral Friendship

Ephemeral Friendship

I’ve given up,
Lost all hope.
You made me miserable.
Made me reckless.

It is unfortunate,
All my time you wasted,
My hours spent,
Minutes down the drain.

You left me,
Alone and rejected,
Abandoned and stranded,
Discarded, deserted, and used.

Breathless and buried,
Cold and cut out,
Forgotten and perished,
Dead and erased.

No longer will I wait,
For you to come to your senses.
No longer will I wait,
For you to befriend me again.

I was always there for you,
Let you cry on my shoulder,
Wanted nothing more,
But to see you happy forevermore.

But nevermore.
 
Old 2004-04-27, 11:53
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L,B'XXX
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That was bittersweet and beautiful. I can empathsize with it. Wouldn't change a bit.
Are you doing it musically? It would make a beautiful piano piece.
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Old 2004-05-18, 22:14
dying-oath
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i like it. i can see a two voice piano thing just like L'B'. it would be cool, especially if you cut in with a really nice solo 3/4s of the way through. anyone listen to Sonata Artica? it would be like their song Talullah. sweet song.
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