I started this a few days ago and finished it up tonight listening to Jason Becker's "Altitudes" and "Speed Metal Symphony" and Moody Blues "Melancholy Man" . Comments appreciated.
Glad to see this forum getting busier. That's cool ! Keep writin' like little demons !!!
" I've Lost You "
I will lash out at the tempest wind.
Shake my fists and shout.
Grab and wield repeated trace
As anger builds inside.
The lightning cannot conquer me.
The storm is but a mist
As my eyes burn through the darkness.
Lusting for its kiss.
Don't turn your back!
Don't throw the switch!
Calm the rage inside--
Of once awakened passions
As on silvered steel I ride.
A bolt of lightning stings the dark.
My arms can't keep it away--
As on the fierce wind I ride
To be with you again.
I called to you from ashen pits
That burned all but my soul.
I called to you with scalding screams
But all was to no avail.
(Chorus)
I've lost you.
Oh , yes, I've lost you
And I don't think I can go on.
I've lost you.
Oh ,yes, I've lost you.
No hope left in the dawn.
(Break)
The bridge is slowing falling
Into depths of endlessness.
And I would gladly throw myself there
If it meant just one kiss.
The storm in the air is no match
For the torment in my heart.
(Chorus)
I've lost you.
Oh ,yes, I've lost you
And I don't think I can go on.
I've lost you.
Oh ,yes, I've lost you.
No hope left in the dawn.
I've loved you and I've lost you.
There's no more hope left in the dawn .
BJH