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2004-04-08, 13:07
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dsnt trust ne1 < 30
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Join Date: Jan 2003
Location: Home is where the <3 is
Posts: 8,881
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I'm not here to fuck up anyone's ego. It's not a piece I'd purchase because of the lyrical content, but if the music was cool I would. That's just personal preference. Your wording was good and and it flowed well so as for the technicalities I'd say you did well. It's just not my thing lyrically.
And 'astral' will always belong to Gary Wright's "Dream Weaver".A really cool song from my day. No offense, but I think it sounds funny in metal songs.
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