This is a black metal tune written and recorded back in 96.'


Describe the pain, are you too eager to tell me?
Describe your feelings to me, and you shall be saved forever
For majic is power and potent as well
Evil can be best described as an essence of pure forces
For the deity is blasphemy, and the crucifixation of christians
will behirit the Earth.

Forever gone in the darkness, evil shall reign the planet
Trapped in a spell, too late to tell, what is the foundation
of Heaven now?
Are you sick of living in a dying world?
Travel with thee, to the edge of the universe..

(Chorus)
Where domination is penetration
And penetration is suffocation, forever in your grasps
The dark lord gives you the most potential in evil incarnate
Behold! the evil potion..!

You now have the power to destroy any human
One look to kill, one sacrafice is another soul's loss
The darkest hour is the one that's power
Fire with fire, in a struggle with Earth's outside forces

Repeat Chorus

You can no longer control the rage within
Losing control, you lose all your stolen souls
Time and majic are not following each other
For the Evil Potion escapes into your soul
Now you've entered Satan's Blasphemous Hole!!!

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Maybe it's due to it being several years old now, but it seems pretty tame and over done. Although back then it may not have been. I didn't see anything structurally or wordwise that was changeable. It just didn't do anything to invoke a reaction in me.
I know you write a lot so I'm sure something else will hit me better.

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Not much of a poem.....it doesnt really flow all that well its more of a chant or something if even, good luck making that into a song

lol... it already is a tune! .. But the way my friend sings it is that he follows the rythym along real smooth. Too bad, I don't have the necessary software to download my music on here. If you heard the tune, you probably wouldn't think of the lyrics much..

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Now that I thought of it, I think this was one of my first black metal tunes. It ain't got real structure to it of course...
Pretty simplistic, and nothing to fond of anything remorseful,
I guess I was just trying to stress out how powerful majic can be to a certain degree and what it's effects are.

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I wanna hear your band im interested in hearing someone on this forum and you guys sound pretty good.

I'm always interested in hearing forumer's music. I've heard some darn good playing at mine. Not a whole lot of metal but some. There's some really talented people on these forums sometimes so be sure and share.

There's one guy at mine that writes some really cool lyrics and some good tunes , but he admits he can't sing well ---though he tries. But another forumer lived close by and they got together and now he sings for Fay Wray over in England. They sound good.

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I'll do what I can to have you's hear my band...the side project band I did with my friend."Black Earth." This is the line up:
Me, doing all guitars, bass, back up vocals, drum programming. My friend Saverio, doing the vocals.
We have 8 cds all together, that I produced and recorded on a Tascam 4 track machine. The last cd we did was called "New Creation." I think it's my best produced cd and guitar sound. What I'll try to do, if you guys can't hear us on here, I'll try to personally mail a cd to you. I know I won't be able to get everyone, maybe a select few. What I'll try to do, is pick up software for burning music, etc, and then post it on here soon.
It may take a while, but none the less, something will be heard.

If you guys want to hear a cd personally, email me with your address/info and I'll see what I can do. I won't charge an arm and a leg for this thing.

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I call dibs on first cd

Move it or lose it !!! Ladies first, bucko !!!

Let me know how much you want for it and I'll let you know where to send it. Cool.

oh alright , you can be first, Shred...

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