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2004-04-04, 17:49
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MYSTICAL ENERGIES OF THE NIGHT.
Eve of Halloween night
Darkness falls
Sorcerors prepare the sabbat
Hear thy call...
Ritual Spawning,
Calling the gates of the 7 dimensions
Gods of immortal extinction
Bounded by the forces of darkness..
Enchanted stone
Laying upon the altar
Cold, brisk air freezes around them
A soul of discern, waiting for your command
An evil apparation is at hand..
Mystical forces of evil rule the night
Make the call
Look into a soul
Misunderstood energy is now in your control.
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2004-04-07, 22:43
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it is truely great, sounds like pro lyrics... great flow, the pieces fall into place very well, even when read fast, it like a short story, yet very lyrical..
do you play in a band ?
Last edited by Raziel : 2004-04-07 at 23:08.
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2004-04-08, 13:13
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Sounds pretty good to me. Flow and all is there and you have your signature imagery there, too. You've got me spoiled in that respect so don't screw up! Nah, write what you feel. Surprises are nice.
Only thing is like I said in another one--ditch the "thy'. It doesn't do a thing for it. Sorta gives me a nightmarish image of midget goths running around repeating "thy , thy, thy..." . And that's scarier than your huntin' songs. 
No offense to any midgets that may be perusing here.
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-wally: Mom, you shouldn't play after me because it makes you sound even worse than you already do. -wally:*grumbles and whispers quietly* I guess it's cuz I love you or something, but you're still a TURD
Grimm:I could read your mind but its in font size .5
Amadeus:Oh, and was there a cesserole (never mind spelling) involved?
Paddy:the fact that you didn't end up on a kids show makes me question my atheism
Dyldo: You evil strumpet!
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2004-04-08, 16:27
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Thanks to both your replies. I just wrote this tune recently too. I think I wrote it about 2 weeks ago. Anyways, I got the inspiration from Konstantanos in the book "The Gothic Grimoire."
I'm not currently in a band, but I look forward to singing and or playing guitar for one.
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