haha, so you know what that means...........INCOHERANCE WRITING!!!!!!!!YAYYYYYY


In the Distance Comes the Fog

Awaken from the night in a cold tremor
For nightmares have invaded my life
From the dawn of time until departure
A ticking time bomb set to explode

Opening the blinds I see the sun rising in the east
To bring a new beginning of a day of sunny life
A life filled with shining light and havens
A life not empty of happiness and love

Embrace yourself, for your life has now begun
A time of bright stars to fill your sky
And as the wind blows from the north I feel….
An awakening from my inner self

Open the heart and feel four chambers of blood
Gushing through the veins of a human body
Feel the burn of life and the strange seed of sin
For the time has come to lift my spirit souring

Through time have I come to realize a fate
Through time have I defied my existence
Through time have I waited for the moment
When the sun sets in the west…

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Hey powers', were you drunk when you wrote 'Ha' too? If you were you should get drunk more often when you've got writin' impleents handy cuz this one was pretty darn good, too. I liked the mixture of dark and light tones in both the visible pictures you painted here as well as the themes of emotion being light and dark. That was cool. Go get drunk and write some more.

Shit, this forum's livelier than my own right at present ! That's cool. I like 'em both.

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