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2004-03-24, 05:58
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Post-whore
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Join Date: Jan 2004
Location: The United Republic of Hell
Posts: 1,171
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ROTTING AWAY
Rotting Away
You seem a bit frightened
I hope you don't mind
I Shattered your bedroom window
So I could get inside
I took a little peek
What I was soon to own
'Cause you mine for life
When I find you alone
Whatcha gonna do?
Whatcha gonna say?
Before I grab you by the throat,
And take your oxygen away
I'll show you a spot
Real far far away
So noone ever finds you
Rotting Away
Last edited by guitarenvy : 2004-03-25 at 03:49.
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2004-03-25, 23:09
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dsnt trust ne1 < 30
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Join Date: Jan 2003
Location: Home is where the <3 is
Posts: 8,881
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WHoo-ah !! That had a good flow and had imagery that I wasn't sure which way it was gonna go. I wasn't sure if it would go the romantic captuer route or the kidnapper type. And there you go making it a forensic files theme song !! I watch a lot of those and this was perfect in a morbid kinda way. Really cool piece! I was a little scared of what you'd do after just reading the other one, but it's cool as hell. Are you doing this musically and if so , how? What style?
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Grimm:I could read your mind but its in font size .5
Amadeus:Oh, and was there a cesserole (never mind spelling) involved?
Paddy:the fact that you didn't end up on a kids show makes me question my atheism
Dyldo: You evil strumpet!
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