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Old 2004-03-24, 05:55
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SHY CORPSE

Shy Corpse

I create your suicide
Mutherfucker, you can't hide
Bleed behind the walls so thin
Something fucks me from within

Disturbing thoughts will lead the way
Dim the lights, and you will stay
No escape now from my chamber
Look straight down my knife of anger

All i need is for you to bleed
Into a cup of your own disease
Anybody want to state their name?
You are next to play my game

Distructive feelings brought within
Down your spine and getting thin
Strange behavior makes me wait
To see what becomes of you this day

Stunning darkness fills the room
Gutting laughter, the sound of doom
I feel what you feel, hate all you hate
Born to be nothing, Dying to be late

You will decide, where you hide
But i will find you deep inside
My sheltered thoughts grow deep within
I'll end your life and live your sin

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Old 2004-03-25, 09:36
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y0! dats liek a f4t beat w0rd dog up^. Your rhyming is almost as juvinile as timos'
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Old 2004-03-25, 09:50
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One question: What the fuck is a "Shy Corpse"? It doesn't make sense.
 
Old 2004-03-25, 15:42
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did u just write what thoughts popped up "..within" your head? there is a lot stuff in there that doesn't make sense, and the title sucks.
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Old 2004-03-25, 17:29
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did u just write what thoughts popped up "..within" your head? there is a lot stuff in there that doesn't make sense, and the title sucks.


hahaha you know it!
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Old 2004-03-27, 20:57
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Alright let me try this

Im going to cut
you slut
i start
you fart

yo' this metal be so hardcore
we done need no more
im brutal with the axe
for when i axe your ass with the axe that i was origionally refering to
ass
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Old 2004-03-29, 00:42
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Alright let me try this

Im going to cut
you slut
i start
you fart

yo' this metal be so hardcore
we done need no more
im brutal with the axe
for when i axe your ass with the axe that i was origionally refering to
ass


That shit is going to make millions

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