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2004-03-25, 22:59
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dsnt trust ne1 < 30
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Join Date: Jan 2003
Location: Home is where the <3 is
Posts: 8,881
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Wull, that was differnt.....since you don't remember the details of it does that mean you were  heehee ...sounds like some of the strange dreams I've had lately. Rather disjointed and not much sense to them , but that 2 ft long praying mantis was pretty cool. That other waspy black bug kicked the shit outta it though. There was guts flying all over. And then these 5 cops came to the door when I found out my grandmother had passed away ---only i remembered after they left that she'd died several years before.... And that was just the normal parts.
Well, anyways, you said you didn't think this was done seriously so I won't be too harsh. It was pretty damn fucked up though.  No offense. We all have our moments. But your wording was quite picturesque. There was a lot of imagery in it even though nothing seems related to anything else. It was like a bad trip. One thing that did seem to round it off nicely and I'm not sure that you did it intentionally was the useage of the numbers at the beginning and end. I thought actually pulled it together.
If the others you've posted are like this though, I'm gonna call The Doctor cuz YOU NEED IT !!! 
Keep writing !
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