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Old 2006-09-03, 09:39
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"Cheyenne"

"Cheyenne"
Jacob Fitzlaff
9/3/2006

Like a cold september raindrop,
We're on a one way avenue.

Peering out of our translucent joyride,
Watching the ground move closer.

And I've got nothing better to do than
Sit on my porch with a cigarette.

Letting life pass me by,
Getting older,
Getting colder,
While the raindrops of september fall from the sky.
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Old 2006-09-03, 10:02
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I think you should extend a little more with some 4 lined verses maybe and make this into song material. I was listening to Harry Nilsson's "Everybody's Talkin' " this morning and this has a feeling like that. Since I know what it's about I think that type mood would fit it just fine.

I really liked it, too. Very laidback and pretty. (just like you. )
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