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Old 2006-02-15, 00:20
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Die!!!!!!!!!!!

....change of pace...this one is rhythmatic by syllable.



From death to Rebirth

Rage in all the world
Faced with hate
Cursed by fate
Seven sins to hurl

I am the anti-christ
Not by will
But Satan's thrill
As his bells ring thrice

From the depths I come
My veins are coarse
My hand is forced
To justify the scum

Raise the dead to help
On death we feed
We burn and bleed
Let these bodies melt


Silence rules the Earth
Empty for
The blessed moor
Waiting for rebirth
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Old 2006-02-15, 00:26
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I like the different rthythm patteren. Very sexy.
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Old 2006-02-15, 01:33
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I like this alot. I'm interested how this would behind some music. (if that even be the case) but i really like the

I am the anti-christ
Not by will
But Satan's thrill
As his bells ring thrice

Reminds me of a few songs i've written. In fact my entire cd is almost based off of the unconcious wills, maybe placed by.. say.. "satan."
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Old 2006-02-15, 07:17
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I like the different rthythm patteren. Very sexy.


That's just cuz you think powers' is cuddly.

Good meter. It took a minute to get it in the 4th stanza, but I just went back and read a couple other 1st lines and got it. It's not bad. It's a bit different from your usual. The 3rd part was a little different concept so that had a little spark to it.
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Old 2006-02-15, 12:30
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nice, i could definitely imagine that in a slayer song. angel of death came to mind when i read this
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Old 2006-02-15, 14:03
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Thanks guys, I like the first and second ones myself.
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Old 2006-02-15, 14:57
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nice, i could definitely imagine that in a slayer song. angel of death came to mind when i read this

Exactly what I thought.
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