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Also, what drum machine are you using? And, what did you use to record it? I was thinking, "damn, that's a good drummer", and then I read that you had programmed the beats.
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Fuck man... that was some badass motherfuckin shit!!!!!
Damn dude, you've successfully fused thrash with death metal. I feel slayer on a riff, I feel necrophagist on another. Very well done my friend. Drums are brutal sounding, fuckin pounded my face in. You have good vision on the music and what sounds good. Which brings me to a question... when your sequencing your drums, I assume you have like many many small drum pieces that you bind together? How many measures do you sequence at a time? Do you just have your sequencer lay like 50 blank measures, and you just hack the whole song away in one piece? Is your sequencer very user-friendly?
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Fuck man... that was some badass motherfuckin shit!!!!!
Damn dude, you've successfully fused thrash with death metal. I feel slayer on a riff, I feel necrophagist on another. Very well done my friend. Drums are brutal sounding, fuckin pounded my face in. You have good vision on the music and what sounds good. Which brings me to a question... when your sequencing your drums, I assume you have like many many small drum pieces that you bind together? How many measures do you sequence at a time? Do you just have your sequencer lay like 50 blank measures, and you just hack the whole song away in one piece? Is your sequencer very user-friendly?
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hey, i think they think that you wrote that song, and i find it amusing
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Here's a little song i have been working on. It's not finished and it ain't the greatest, but tell me what you guys think. Btw it's my first time using powertab so some of the speeds may not be correct and i tune my guitar to C#.
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Good job, I also play things in one shot. I did Kissing your Shadows, and now I'm working on Silent Night, Bodom Night and Funeral in Carpathia. Funereal in Carpathia is an easy song, but will be hard singing and playing the guitar simultaneously for it. The singer in Cradle anyway doesn't play guitar. Only one guitar in your song?
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I just finished my new Piano composition that gets proffesionally played and recorded by a well known german pianist here in Bonn/Germany...
The Genre is a mixture of everything, but in general I describe it as experimental progressive modern jazz.
The whole piece is based on a story, which I can put online by any interest....
My intention was, to make the piece so that nobody likes it at first, but the more often you listen to it, the better you will like it.
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this one is live at my 8th grade graduation. i even got paid $50 by my school.
the drummer was some highschooler
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and the rythm guitarist was some highschooler.
that was my band for about 2 months. then we broke up.
and the guy who recorded it cut it short!!!   
i did some studio work to get the drums to sound like drums and to equalize it. cuz the bassists volume was much louder than in the recording.
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Here's a cover i did of Vengeance Unleashed (Dying Fetus). It definitely isn't perfect and i didnt unclude the solo (im working on it right now). Well tell me what you guuys think, its obviously not perfect. oh yeah one more thing. on one of the riffs where it is supposed to be triplets, i did power chords instead. to me it sounds better.
http://www.digitalsoundplanet.com/M...8_000029284.mp3
edit: it doesnt automatically begin with vengeance unleashed. for the first like 5 seconds im just fucking around doing nothing
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That sounds real cool man! im listening to it right now
Good Work
EDIT: I just listened to your one Youngguitarist and thats fuckin cool aswell, i wish it was longer 
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Fuckin shit! That kicks ass dude. That shit right there is as good any DM band that walks on the scene for sure! Plus those riffs, ... some chaotic and blitzkrieg, some super thrashy headbanging, very diverse and interesting sounding. Good work! I'm fuckin super jealous! 
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This is just a pretty cool sweep that I was playing with, so I decided to tab it.
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This is just a pretty cool sweep that I was playing with, so I decided to tab it.
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I finished the rest of it today, sounds fucking sweet but i need to practise it more to get the speed up.
This tab doesnt sound exactly right, I suck at the whole time signatures thing, so a few parts are different from how I play it. But tell me what you think.
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Superb as always.
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You're too kind ... Have you checked out the new track, "333", in my profile?
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Pretty cool sounding, nice taps piece in there, also good fade transitions. You definitely incorporate that classical vibe.
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Very cleanly executed, and sorry if i am wrong, but sounds like some nice legato runs in there. If the legato runs i am thinking about are picked, then thats some nice picking. Good work for both musicians on this track. |
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Guitarpro Tab...
Hey,
Been reading the forum for some while and came across this thread.
Just wondering if anyone is willing to give some sort of critique on a guitarpro tablature I wrote for a project.
It's meant to sort of Amorphis like deathmetal, but I think it lacks something
Just can't figure out what, too repetitive and generic maybe. I haven't been into songwriting for very long so I kinda lack in the theory department which you probably will notice
Anyway, here's the tab: http://213.114.243.147/krieg2-test.gp4
It's not 100% done, lacks another solo and the first one blows sort of
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Hey,
Been reading the forum for some while and came across this thread.
Just wondering if anyone is willing to give some sort of critique on a guitarpro tablature I wrote for a project.
It's meant to sort of Amorphis like deathmetal, but I think it lacks something
Just can't figure out what, too repetitive and generic maybe. I haven't been into songwriting for very long so I kinda lack in the theory department which you probably will notice
Anyway, here's the tab: http://213.114.243.147/krieg2-test.gp4
It's not 100% done, lacks another solo and the first one blows sort of
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It sounds pretty good, theres some pretty cool riffs in there, and that solo isnt bad, and a cool old-school sound to it kinda.
How long have you been writing songs for? This is better than I can do (i suck because i have no theory either.) But I can come up with solos if i mess around with some scales.
Post it again when its done
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yeah, one night he (BassBehemoth) came with some GHB and he put it in my drink, when i woke up....i lost my hymen....terrible |
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2005-07-12, 23:25
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Hey,
Thanks for the review, I really appreciate it
I started writing songs in guitarpro earlier this year. I've only had a guitar for 9 months sort of. But I'm trying to practise as much as I can, and read theory.
I've never thought about taking lessons or anything, so internet and forums are a great part of my learning methods. |
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Hey,
Thanks for the review, I really appreciate it
I started writing songs in guitarpro earlier this year. I've only had a guitar for 9 months sort of. But I'm trying to practise as much as I can, and read theory.
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Yeah I have just been teaching myself too, but i cant seem to pick up theory online  Ill get lessons at some stage.
Oh yeah, I threw a solo into your song to see what it sounded like. It doesnt really fit in properly with the rhythm guitar (solo needs to have speed turned up).
Ill post it for if you want to hear it.
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Don't be gay.
It sounds a lot like a Joe Satriani rip off.. eh cant remember...
I'm not too fond of the rythym guitar.
You are a very skilled guitarist to be able to whip something like that up. (no sarcasm)
But please, never write songs for/ about loved ones... one of my favourite quotes is
"Keep love out of music except for love of music itself"
I sincerely hope you come to realise how gay writing songs for girlfriends is.
(unless the loved one you are writing about passed away)
and then its just embarrassing and stupid when you break up/ get dumped... a waste of solo's, riffs,vocals maybe..its just a waste.
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Problematic, never had a girlfriend huh?
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That was insane
That sounded great in my ears atleast, too bad with the rhytm part
It kinda gave me some ideas in what to write, but I dunno if I'll ever be able to finish a fast solo like that, I'm not all that good at writing great sounding solos
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Check out Necrophagist and Jason becker, and get some sweeping ideas. Seriously it looks hard, but its the easiest way to play awesome stuff amazingly fast.
Check out the sweeping thread too, theres some real cool patterns in there.
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ur entitled to ur opionion thanks for the critisim now i have something to work off of . whatever acctually i think it sounded good, took a long ass time to make. ill try and get some more later. i have some ideas.just give me a week or so. this isnt the first time i wrote for her anyways. we've been together for a long ass time. so whats so bad. besides i try not to tame my creativity |
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ur entitled to ur opionion thanks for the critisim now i have something to work off of . whatever acctually i think it sounded good, took a long ass time to make. ill try and get some more later. i have some ideas.just give me a week or so. this isnt the first time i wrote for her anyways. we've been together for a long ass time. so whats so bad. besides i try not to tame my creativity |
I think that it was a really well written song.
And good for you and your gf, it can be a major inspiration to music - obviously not blood-drinking metal, but thats not what all music is about.
Who cares if someone calls it gay, it was a good song. What did your g/f think??
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I think that it was a really well written song.
And good for you and your gf, it can be a major inspiration to music - obviously not blood-drinking metal, but thats not what all music is about.
Who cares if someone calls it gay, it was a good song. What did your g/f think??
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Whats the cheeky grin for aye hehe
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there's this band im not sure if u heard of it, but its called Mr.Big. it had paul gilbert and billy sheehan. thats what i was aiming for.i've never heard satriani play like that or let his bassist solo out either. |
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Hey,
Been reading the forum for some while and came across this thread.
Just wondering if anyone is willing to give some sort of critique on a guitarpro tablature I wrote for a project.
It's meant to sort of Amorphis like deathmetal, but I think it lacks something
Just can't figure out what, too repetitive and generic maybe. I haven't been into songwriting for very long so I kinda lack in the theory department which you probably will notice
Anyway, here's the tab: http://213.114.243.147/krieg2-test.gp4
It's not 100% done, lacks another solo and the first one blows sort of
I'd be grateful if anyone took time on this |
Pretty cool, even if you haven't been writing songs for long. The first few riffs are stuff that I just randomly play when I'm bored, trying to play some Behemoth or modern Morbid Angel. :P The solo break part was cool. If you need to change anything, it's the chords in the chorus section, maybe work on the chorus lead too. Your song has an oldschool DM feel, that's a very cool thing in my eyes. Cheers.
Edit: Mr Big had Paul Gilbert in it? d00d... I had absolutely no idea. Yeah, I know Mr. Big, though I'm only familiar with that song "Shine" and the other tracks from the same album, they used that song in the ending credits for Hellsing, one hell of a song. \m/
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Edit: Mr Big had Paul Gilbert in it? d00d... I had absolutely no idea. Yeah, I know Mr. Big, though I'm only familiar with that song "Shine" and the other tracks from the same album, they used that song in the ending credits for Hellsing, one hell of a song. \m/
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he was in it at the begging then him and sheehan left. |
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