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awesome song man, i like it !
you should add a drums (i can help u for that if u want  )
by the way, here's a song (melodic death metal) i wrote it last year 
edit: here's in gp4 format
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awesome song man, i like it !
you should add a drums (i can help u for that if u want )
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Sure, you can change it as much as you want and put it up again, might get a few ideas you know
edit: yeah I donīt have gp5 so if you posted it in gp4 format I would be happy
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hey dudes,
me and my friend decided to pay respect to one of the greatest metal vocalists in the world, phil ofcourse, so we took the initiative to cover songs from a couple of his bands. Majority will be down, pantera and superjoint. We wanna do a myspace, but i'd like some feedback on two songs we did recently.
Remember, we're not trying to sound exactly like the original, its just 2 guys drinkin and jammin, by no means perfect.
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I just listened to "Man That Follows Hell". Sounds great. Unfortunately it seem that for the other file the website requires membership/sign in. Shit. But it'd be awesome to see you have a MySpace page. There's so many talentless fucks on there (heh, probably me included since the material I used is pretty weak), that it needs more good bands. I'd love to hear your Down/SuperJoint/Pan-fucking-Tera covers. Anyway, the one I did get to listen to sounded sweet. The vocals were a little...intoxicated at times, but that just makes it sound more like Phil anyway. 
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Yeah, it works now. Definitely kicks ass. Reminds me of the real thing. And I bet your live shows are awesome. 
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i only changed the 50th bar range to harmonic, the rest -i think- is perfect 
awesome song, u kick ass man 
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here's with drums in gp4 format (sorry to make u waiting for )
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The "Devil's Dance" link in my sig isn't up at this moment -- the songs are still loading. But when they do come up, I'd be interested in hearing what you guys think of my arrangement of Metallica's song. The original seemed too pussy for me (well, after all, it was off Load or Reload -- can't remember which one). So I thought this sounded better. Well, maybe not my shitty vocals. But you get the idea.
UPDATE: Yee-haw. Looks like they finally are up. 
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Ok... i got really bored one night and recorded some ambience type stuff. Reason it is in the guitar forum though, is that everything you hear was done on guitar. I think it worked out ok, for no real set structure or anything, and I threw it together in like an hour and a half. Alot of it, is running a scalpel blade over the strings.
http://www.medicinal-waste.co.uk/ArchaicIntro.mp3
The samples are there because its going to be used as an intro for my band if I ever get the opportunity. Itd be brutal.
I really want to do more orchestral stuff like this though, and more thought out. Like, horror film soundtracks.
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The latest riff in the recording i worked on this weekend. (demo recording)
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Our album due out in late fall.
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The latest riff in the recording i worked on this weekend. (demo recording)
Your opinions are wanted.
Our album due out in late fall.
http://www.yousendit.com/transfer.p...D2406673101043A
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guitar needs more clarity...it seems to muggy or over distorted...It seems like some of the notes just melt in together which makes it hard to hear the melody. Other then that I liked it! |
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Black riff, probably been done before
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Shit it does sound like typical black metal, had to of been done before.
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yo hear are a few songs ive made over a little while
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Here's some 'improvisation' (F# harmonic minor and a bit o' th'diminished) over a malmsteen midi I just did. Nothing serious, just for fun, so I'm not fussed about the structure or the m,any out of key notes... I'll work on it  Though I turned volume off, around 25 seconds it sounds like the song has been cut apart then stuck together, but it's just from some scab on MSN messaging :/
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Heres a jam track i made today, guitar and drums. The guitar is channeled left and right (2 tracks) so the quality is not bad. Check it out, gimme comments on my tone, ect.... Was pretty much made up as i went along but turned out not bad!
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not to be an ass, but i think the guitars sounds pretty bad in that vid, is it the final mix?
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Heres a jam track i made today, guitar and drums. The guitar is channeled left and right (2 tracks) so the quality is not bad. Check it out, gimme comments on my tone, ect.... Was pretty much made up as i went along but turned out not bad!
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i liked it. i think you need to turn down the gain and dime those fuckin mids. its a really cool song. id scream over that anyday. at the part at 2:30, that chuggy part you should do the drums one way the first time than change them up the second time that riff comes maybe just double up the bass pattern.
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ehmmm..... here are some fragments... ok, the song is called "fragments of my inner being" it's not finished yet, but well, tell me what you think of it
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ehmmm..... here are some fragments... ok, the song is called "fragments of my inner being" it's not finished yet, but well, tell me what you think of it
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It's cool though...
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I recorded this song ages ago. Haven't really finished it but I may as well post it so I can get some opinions.
Click on link to download you cunce
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pretty good Anugrah. u got speed but u sound too much like yngwie or the other sweep addicts. u need to find ur own unique sound. but overall great stuff, just a little repetitious. keep up the good work though. u got some skills. just do a lil work on phrasin.
need 4 speed kinda reminded me of jason becker. i like.
good stuff. sounds like u have plenty of fun with ur music.
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pretty good Anugrah. u got speed but u sound too much like yngwie or the other sweep addicts. u need to find ur own unique sound. but overall great stuff, just a little repetitious. keep up the good work though. u got some skills. just do a lil work on phrasin.
need 4 speed kinda reminded me of jason becker. i like.
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It's really sad, all those people who don't understand why we shouldn't act like our enemies. The real victory is not only killing and imprisoning the terrorists, but also letting civilized manners override the lust for revenge, once the battle is over.
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2006-06-29, 15:19
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Just a short acoustic thing.
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2006-06-30, 06:15
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Heres a song thats starting to come together heres the lyrics
your baby - your baby - your babys dead in your womb
and you assume - in your womb - its alive but it has died
no clue - dead inside you - rotten baby decayed
Liquid bursts - the waters broken - mutilated waterfall
dismembered limbs the brain outside the skin
gashed open flesh worms devour child within
Mothers pussy covered with severed baby
hanging from the noose of the umbilical cord
Your infant - there it lies - being eaten by the flys
Such misery - Your baby - just a corpse cant you see
Your fetus - Is lucky - never to suffer
what could have been - I dont care - Smell of death fills the air
i just need four more lines
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2006-06-30, 06:47
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2006-06-30, 23:38
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How juvenile....
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2006-07-01, 01:06
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yeah, its sweet
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hahaha
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6 lvl 80's sucka.
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Heres a song thats starting to come together heres the lyrics
your baby - your baby - your babys dead in your womb
and you assume - in your womb - its alive but it has died
no clue - dead inside you - rotten baby decayed
Liquid bursts - the waters broken - mutilated waterfall
dismembered limbs the brain outside the skin
gashed open flesh worms devour child within
Mothers pussy covered with severed baby
hanging from the noose of the umbilical cord
Your infant - there it lies - being eaten by the flys
Such misery - Your baby - just a corpse cant you see
Your fetus - Is lucky - never to suffer
what could have been - I dont care - Smell of death fills the air
i just need four more lines
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pussy isnt a very metal word,
go with cunt
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2006-07-01, 05:08
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2006-07-01, 05:12
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pussy isnt a very metal word,
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haha thanks, im so stupid
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2006-07-01, 08:26
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hmmm I guess I finished the song? The end of the solo I still need to do some work on...yeah
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2006-07-01, 19:54
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pussy isnt a very metal word,
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Yeah, pussy's more of a gangsta rap word.
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DETH TOLL!!!
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Originally Posted by Amadeus
It's really sad, all those people who don't understand why we shouldn't act like our enemies. The real victory is not only killing and imprisoning the terrorists, but also letting civilized manners override the lust for revenge, once the battle is over.
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Originally Posted by Slaytanic Jess
Heres a song thats starting to come together heres the lyrics
your baby - your baby - your babys dead in your womb
and you assume - in your womb - its alive but it has died
no clue - dead inside you - rotten baby decayed
Liquid bursts - the waters broken - mutilated waterfall
dismembered limbs the brain outside the skin
gashed open flesh worms devour child within
Mothers pussy covered with severed baby
hanging from the noose of the umbilical cord
Your infant - there it lies - being eaten by the flys
Such misery - Your baby - just a corpse cant you see
Your fetus - Is lucky - never to suffer
what could have been - I dont care - Smell of death fills the air
i just need four more lines
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On Powertab Editor, hit F11. Fix all of that shit.
This is my current work, and I may come back later and post a lot of my earlier endeavors when I finish this one. The power tab is so cramped and sloppy looking, but I'll fix all that once it is complete. There is also a slight measure malfunction at the very end, but I think I prefer it cut off like that. I might change it later. Anyway: |
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hmmm something that I made after listening to Vio-Lence...made me want to make a slow to fast intro song thingy...It still needs some direction and more time but there are some nice killer riffs in there...
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2006-07-02, 10:28
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Hi!
Hi.. im new here and i want to show you 2 songs i did. The first is a Death Metal song for my band Deadly Pale and the second is a Black Metal song.
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2006-07-02, 17:41
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hmmm something that I made after listening to Vio-Lence...made me want to make a slow to fast intro song thingy...It still needs some direction and more time but there are some nice killer riffs in there...
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2006-07-02, 19:47
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2006-07-02, 20:36
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hmmm something that I made after listening to Vio-Lence...made me want to make a slow to fast intro song thingy...It still needs some direction and more time but there are some nice killer riffs in there...
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I liked the last riff the best. A lot of it was kinda generic, but then you did say it was inspired by Vio-lence I'd also say there were too many reps of some parts, but whne you take into account drum variations and vocal parts it would seem less with a whole band. |
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I guess I owe you specifics. I really thought that slow first riff was weak. It looked and sounded to me like some sort of beginning power chord exercise. The whole slow-to-fast intro thing would be great, but. You should really elaborate that riff a lot more. A lot of the E chugging is pretty weak as well. Some of the rythms in the song I thought sounded pretty neat, but as I said before the weak riffs sort of disappoint. I'm sure it's not set into stone, just giving you some things to think about. |
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2006-07-03, 00:44
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Dude you are my hero.... Seriously you kick ass, us young guitarists gots-ta stick together!
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2006-07-03, 02:21
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haha, i like ur bands name. its got a ring to it. nice songs too
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2006-07-05, 22:29
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don't know... just a little creation, it's shit, but i was bored (and drunk)...
sounds a little bit like hate eternal  and meshuggah |
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My Ass, Your Face
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'Euphoric Ejaculation' ROFL
Your parents must be proud.
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Wore her out before I could finish(which im grateful for)
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Funeral Mulch; My brutal death metal band from West Michigan. |
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2006-07-07, 21:53
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lol glad you like it |
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2006-07-08, 19:50
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2006-07-09, 00:46
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i did The Black Dahlia Murder - Elder Misanthropy guitar jam-along.
listen to it if you like, its pretty close i think... ive only played it a few times though.
RIGHT CLICK AND "SAVE TARGET AS.."
http://24.109.145.185/tbdmguitar.mp3 |
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2006-07-09, 23:50
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that was pretty awesome man. we should do more of those, they;re interesting to listen to
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2006-07-10, 17:17
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Somewhat doomy crap.
Ignore the text Iīve written, itīs just a early attempt at lyrics
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Here's a short song (I think it's less than two minutes actually) that I made a few weeks ago. No clue what genre you'd describe it as. I couldn't think of a name so I called it 36 since it's my 36th song that I've made.
*edit*
I've renamed the song Frozen Sun, scroll down to my other post and find it. I made the end sound better in it, too.
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2006-07-19, 00:21
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Hereīs a thing I wrote while feeling a bit awkward.
Itīs about feeling fucked in the head haha
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2006-07-21, 11:29
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Heres several songs (many incomplete) that I made while doing a project I called Barghest... never finished it... eugh.
ps: Nice song, Phlack, the intro reminded me of Iron Maiden  , and the arrpeggios or whatever they were in Descent were good stuff.
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2006-07-21, 11:34
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Here's more songs, songs #2 (Frozen Sun) and #3 (Journey Through Consciousness) I still work on every day.
ps: If anybody is interested in working together with me to create some songs or something, feel free to send me a pm! I can only work in guitarpro, not familiar with powertab, and I suck at actually playing guitar, so... yeah.
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2006-07-21, 13:05
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Few songs. The first one is death metal and the second is unfinished rock song that changes to metal in the end.
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2006-07-26, 17:18
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Didnīt I just post a song here?
Well, guess Iīll try again
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2006-07-26, 22:04
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THis more of a tapped harmanoics exercise than a song but itīs kinda fun to listen too
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2006-07-30, 19:49
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I wrote this today, my bassist told me it sounded way too much like metallica but ah fuck him!
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Lo, they do call to me...
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just got gp5, so i am trying my hand at drum tracks, lemme know what you guys think.
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Here's my solo myspace page for anyone to listen to. I just use it as a dump for all the songs I record. The latest one is the one called "Exstinguishing the flame" so any comments on that would be appreciated.
Oh and please excuse the vocals on "Why angels fly"!
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2006-08-14, 18:28
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Isn't anyone afraid of someone else stealing your songs?
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