Lying, dying from within
Life can be so cruel
The only thing I wanna do
Is kill the kids at school
Take a knife and stick it in
Needles in the eyes
Brand them with an iron rod
Listen to their cries

Nothing can be done now
Their brains are on the floor
The little voice inside my head
Is begging me for more...

Bloody treats, tasting sweet
Licking up the juice
Tongue is trailing to the corpse
Flesh is coming loose
Face falls further deep within
Ripping out the meat
Deep inside the ribcage now
Clawing at the feet

Nothing can be done now
Their brains are on the floor
The little voice inside my head
Is begging me for more

Blood spilling, killing kids
Never wanna stop
Feisty bitches good to eat
Entrails on the top
Don't know why they hated me
They thought that they were cool
Now it doesn't matter
Coz I killed the kids at school

Nothing can be done now
Their brains are on the floor
The little voice inside my head
Is satisfied once more

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Its sortof funny, i spose. Well it is to me anyway. There are so many people at my school who I want to do this to... I wrote this about half a year ago whilst wagging in an abandoned building after putting up with a shitload of crap from a bunch of kids at school. I was trying not to do anything or else I would have grabbed something and stabbed them with it.

Go cut yourself while listening to marilyn manson. Loser

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I see a lawsuit coming up for you.

you're gonna get screwed by some lawyer
but i like the piece

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Due to the tortuous nature I'm not surprized that d_o liked it. I thought it was rather tasty ,too. Not quite serious mind you ,but sort of says what it needs to. Hey, when they're pointing fingers at you they point more at themselves. Don't let it get to ya. After graduation none of them matter anyways.
It had a good flow to it and was pretty smooth. The entrails line was the only one I thought could be a little better worded so that's minor.
Hey, just don't go snakeshit for real.

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hahahahahaha if someone find this youll seriously go to jail

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no, i doubt that. Transient, if that was true, i would be in jail so much. i mean, just go look at "The Torture Chamber" that would get me busted.
Gram, i know, what's becoming of the new generation? we're all so focused on killing
; )

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fuck man good poem, sometimes i feel like that...i would just never ever do it. Hopefully you wouldnt either. Good poem tho

And shut up about lawyers and shit

If he lives in America yes the big bad stupid pieces of shit FBI will be on you i think.

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better venting it through writing, than acting upon it.

I used to feel similiar to you when i was in school. Not to such an extreme, but i deeply despised most people in my school. And to boot, it was during the columbine fiasco. A girl actually came up to me once and said "if you start to kill people, can you spare me". I was fucking flabergasted, so of course i said, "you're first you ignorant bitch".....
what a world.

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haha you must be a real loser

Nah, hes from PEI, you would go crazy just being on the island for more then 20 mins... I did.

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PEI? what, some secret gang association where you live on an island or something?
where's this fabled island? i think i would go crazy, if not surrounded by...............oh shit, wrong forum for that stuff

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Prince Edward Island = PEI (and yes its a provence)

Its a small island off the coast of New Brunswick/Nova Scotia... Its part of canada.

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yes, fbi and cops and all that

at the least youd need to see a therapist

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No, due to the columbine shit they take it way too seriously, I suppose they should, but they are still gay.

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If having long hair and listening to heavy metal, made me a loser, i guess i was.

Dick wad

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absolutely, those asshats at columbine changed EVERYTHING

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Hey ! That means I'm a loser too! We can all be losers together! Only thing is I can't sit on my long, blonde hair almost anymore. I got this new little Scorpion vaccuum cleaner and had my braid hanging down and it kinda got sucked against the motor housing and YANK ! I think I got a trim ? (Hmm, did I say I was blonde?)

Isn't that what started the whole Columbine thig anyway? Kids calling other kids losers basically? I've been called an airhead, a blonde, a freak, a hippie, a geek,a french person and mom so tell me that isn't abuse? And I've survived.

It's ridiculous the kind of world in which we live, but each generation has said that, too. It used to be if kids said "I'm gonna kill you!" it meant you were gonna beat them up or seek some type of mild revenge on them , but now it's a verbal assault that has to be documented and all that crap. You just have to be descreet about who you say what to. I don't take poetry or lyrics about things like that real seriously. Maybe I should. The ones in which someone seems truely suicidal I have more caution with because the tone just seems a cry at times. No one should ever feel that way.

I do sometimes wonder if songs and stuff gets anyone's attention.

Heck, when Bob was in elementary school they made a list of kids in their class. The parents got called in for a special meeting before they even asked any of these kids what the list was for. It was for a baseball game they were planning. People had taken time from work and gotten babysitters and all for that. It was ridiculous.

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KILL KILL KILL

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its good!

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Oh, you sailors are all alike ! Seek and destroy !!!

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hell yeah.
Lord Soul, what a perspective.............

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Looks like i came here a bit late, but i agree with BLS on this. If you didnt insert that footer or the song was simply sadistic [not revenge] then it'd be ok.

but you put that little bit of shit in about how emotional you were by that 'was gonna stab them' or whtever.
That was just fucking dumb

Shut up Infinity, he was getting stuff out. leave him alone.

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shut up, your gay

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don't start this again BLS, you only serve to make yourself look stupid

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oh im sorry, did the world get to hard for him? poor little baby... lets all feel sorry

this thread sucks

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infinity, you have no idea

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hahaha, i have no idea?

depressed people should kill themselves, goths are fags, people that have peircings tattoos or dye their hair are dumb, suicide people deserve to die, people who cant stand life deserve no sympathy, fags who wear wristbands or rings are gay, marriage is dumb, any religion is stupid, try hards are dumb, racism is stupid, violence is a fact, people get murdered and there are murderers...

there is too much to say about the fags on this planet.

I guess you've got it all figured out eh.
..and so young.
What are you gonna do with the rest of your life now?

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play guitar.



no, really, i guess everyone is against me on this?
well, its a rhetorical question, isnt it? but all there is to do is expereience. its why i live. the only thing i fear is death. im unsure why. all i can do with my life is think and experience. from a job and a wage to living on my own.
i know nothing i do is going to help anyone do anything. nothing i acheive will matter. i realize that everything i do will be lost.

the only thing there is to do is ponder and experience

you fear death?
do not insult others for wishing it to come then, or for not fearing it

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its not so much a fear as it is a timer that im waiting to count down. if someone told me i had cancer and was gonna die i wouldnt care.

i fear that i wont be able to do anything i want to do before my time runs out

Shutup, your stupid, a liar, and gay

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That's my favorite game

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Ah, I think with few exceptions you all need some Midol. If you haven't been depressed, insulted, or felt misunderstood you've lived under a bigger rock than me. Sometimes those given the most materially are the ones hurting the most.
We were having a discussion at my forum and I mentioned an old song that came from my head out of nowhere. It's called "Walk a Mile in My Shoes" and was written and sung by Joe South.
Now I know you guys like to bitch and argue just for the sake of bitching and arguing, but it's a good song with a very honest message so check it out sometime.

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I have been depressed, insulted, and misunderstood lots lately; even by family. I'm not sure I know what you mean, L'BXXX, but I give so much materially, to my family and wifes. I get only the above critizism in return. Yet, they take what I give them. I don't know what else to do, but I would understand better if they didn't take the money and gifts. They call it blood money. I only like to tell them, KILL KILL KILL in return for their insults! Maybe I'm just evil?

and drunk

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holy shit inifinty, youre a complete tool. people other than goths commit suicide. seriously, shut up you maddox-wannabe

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Oh on now im wounded. really-i took that to heart. im so sorry for myself i might go commit suicide [or kill the kids at school]

oh, and i cant see anywhere that i said that only goths kill themselves, you fucking retard

i forgot to add people sticking up for other peoples right through empathy or sympathy are gay.

fo sho

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jesus christ, just when nothingbutassface leaves another irritating kid shows up

cant you act older than your age?

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yeh no shit, what kind of immature bitch writes a poem about killing his school mates.... FAG

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I talked with my guitar teacher today, and he asked me if i knew the difference between stupidity and ignorance. I answered that ignorance is an unwillful lack of knowledge, whereas stupidity is the willful lack of knowledge, so take it to heart when I tell you to either shut up, or stop being stupid.

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Yet ignorance is not bliss, and wisdom brings sadness.

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make me popcrorn

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Me ,too. Not a whole lot of salt cuz it chaps my lips.

Soulinsane, a friend of mine told me once that sometimes you can give so much of yourself without getting anything in return that you turn into a shell of yourself basically. Those closest to you are sometimes the one's that understand the least. Over the past few years I finally learned something to keep me from feeling the way you do in some ways. I give what I choose without expecting a darn thing back. It makes me feel good and I'm not disappointed that my intentions aren't appreciated.
I does suck when it's family though. But if you and your missus have a good relationship then what goes on with them I wouldn't worry about. I know it's tough, but that's what you have to remember. I'm pretty private in my life as far as my mom goes, but I love her more than ever. She and I just don't always see eye to eye on things.

powers' !?? Are you still praising satIn ? heehee

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Most definately. It feels so soft against my skin...

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ok guys, lock this one up

jesus

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You come in here, take our land, and polute our oceans....

mr big guy

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sorry?

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That's a pretty bleak outlook on your life man.
think positive.

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Thats the truth. running away from reality never helped anyone - wow rather like bloodjunky, who had to hide in a warehouse to escape life. how ...weak

so why do you do the same thing infinity?
you hide behind all of your insults and put downs. they have become you, now, when people look at you, they see all the trash, 'cause that's what you have to hide behind. who's being weak now?

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stop giving this idiot attention

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grrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr

http://www.wlra.us/hb/hbbigfoot.jpg

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Accepting reality, and accepting failure are two different things

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attention has been retracted

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nobody look at him

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Okay, everyone turn and stare at Transient.

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*looks away from infinity in disgust...............*

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*whips it out*

what're you looking at now

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Nothing much! Put that thing away before a bird tries to eat it.

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I like it. Make a song out of it. it remainds me a bit of "School's out forever" from Pungent Stench.

"L,B'XXX whips out magnifying glass"

What Soul' said ,Transient!

HaHa! Soul' ! That first part was exactly what I was gonna say but your ending was cool .

Please tell me that that's not a remake of Alice Cooper's song? That's like sombody redoing a Queen song. It's just not right.

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ok, ENOUGH

no more of this thread!

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yes, dear.

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You need help bro... Remember Columbine? That wasn't cool. You know, when I was in school, I was the guy who showed up with long ass hair wearing Deicide and Cannible Corpse shirts. I was the most hated and missunderstood kid at school. I endured all of their bullshit. Now I am over it. You'll live. Nice poem though. JUST DON'T TAKE IT LITTERALLY!!!!

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^ wow finally somone who makes sense

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oh poor babies, school is so rough isn't it? Try instead of feeling sorry for yourself every time they talk shit, talk shit back, stand up for yourself. That IS why you have a spine right? And if that don't work go to fisticuffs, weapons are never needed by a strong man. Just fuck them up. Besides that once you graduate NONE of them matter anymore.

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I remember in my Driver's Ed class, they kept drilling into your head "Identify Predict Decide Execute" to prepare for avoiding an accident. It was written on some poster
Some jerkoff put on 'i' in Decide, and it said "Identify Predict DEICIDE Execute"

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or you can be a normal person who likes metal. i never understand all the people with EMPEROR shirts that get picked on and act all cliquey. cant you just like music, wear what you wear and be friends with whoever? what the hell does it matter?

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I don't understand the Deicide part, atif.

I remember going being in the school auditorium and the principal talking about those of us who wanted to , could take a bus to go an away basketball game and that we could bring a friend as long as we let them know ahead to see how many busses we'd need. This guy who was supposed to be my friend turned around and said to me "Freaks aren't allowed on the bus. " He was referring to the guy I'd been dating for about a year and a half who I'd grown up with. I didn't say anything to him. But I saw him a few years ago and he's still a jerk and he treated his other old 'friends' the same way. SOme people have no fetchin' up. I couldn't care less if I never saw him again. ther's too many cool people out there. The 'freak' included.

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God dammit atif why did you have to remind be of IPDE GAHHH!! Damn Illinois' Driver's Ed.

And DEICIDE is a Satanic Death Metal band, L,B'XXX


DUH

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I liked what Transient said....."ok, ENOUGH...no more of this thread!"

don't come in here and try to fuck up our forum, go find your own if you're not going to create or even TRY to hold intelligent conversations.

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I said I'd pick on this poem, so I have to.
I feel that way sometimes but this poem was straight up gay!
There, I'm done.....................................psycho.

PS: Kick ass user-name bloodjunky665! Lamb Of God rule!

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"straight up gay"

are you older than 12?

seriously, LOCK

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easy to write. hard to do
You try to stick up to 10 big motherfuckers. (jocks at that age). play sports all day long, etc. huge.
you skinny, small.
I've tried and i was bootfucked, hard.

sometimes your balls can grow too fuckin big.

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did anyone read what i said? cant you just get along with people? do you have to have an attitude in the first place? im friends with everyone and i listen to metal all the time

dont be a prick and no one will pick on you, thats the biggest misconception of high school:everyone thinks that if you wear different clothes you get picked on. not true. if you act like an elitist prick then youll get picked on

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the concept sounds great.
but kids are mean man

I was the nicest guy to everyone i met.
That doesnt' matter to some.

just look around at this forum.
The judgement. over music. Same shit happens with genres and social classes.

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explain. with examples.

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i hope the cops trace the fuckign IP address and your ass gets it. Fucking fag.

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I'm referring to how some (notice i'm not generalizing).
Beleive that if you listen to other types of music you are a complete idiot. I can give you examples, and you know i can, but I'd rather not waste the time. And i'm in no way stating that this is a metal-head trait. It's universal.

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I'm likin' where Trend's coming from...i see your point and i agree. personally, I'm really arrogant...if you don't know me...i look arrogant, but if you really get to know me, you'll find that it's really all just a joke, and that i'm really accepting...sure i'll make fun of you and all, but it's all in fun, and those that know me, know that...and we're all okay with that. too bad there are so few who are either like this or just plain don't get it.

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since when did thought crime become cause for disciplanary action?

eh george?

....or shall i call you big brother.....
last i checked thinkin is still free.

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Thought crimes! Watch out! Prevent the crime before it happens by detecting those that... think of it! It's the only way to be safe. Dubblespeek pleesmee

Go Orwell!

Is it 1984 or 2004?

Dicksuction mangod jobcleancing. Bestallothers. Futuresave=futuresake. Happyfuck!

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This is a long ass thread. so i read the first page.
Anyway, when i was in 11th grade i told this assfuck i was going to kill him and later i got called in, his parents were there and the principal said i was going to get charges pressed on me. But when it came to him asking questions i denied it. it took less than 10 minutes and everything was normal. The rest of the year, id tell that kid i was going to sue him when i passed him in the hall.
Oh, and a little interesting fact: the next year his little brother in the middle school got raped by the janitor. fuckin sick.

ahahahahahahaha

hey kid, come help me find my mop in the closet

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I told a kid once back in high school that I was going to beat him up until he died. I was only trying to get him back for something he did. He got really scared and said he had so much to live for, that he wasn't even done with school yet, that it was unfair he die.

I told him that I wasn't completely cold hearted, that I understood his pain, but nothing was going to change my mind and he would have to die. I told him he had until the last day of school to enjoy life and then I would beat him to death. I found out how many days were still in the school year and everytime I seen him in the hall way, I would say the number of days he had to live; like 81 days. The last week was fun. The last day, I just smiled real big at him. I never did anything to him, but he thought I was serious.

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that's screwed up.

nice Lord Soul.........you're awesome

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Here in the states we call that 'plotting.' Granted, its fucking stupid, but it doesn't mean anything. And especially this kind of thing they would take seriously.

I just hope the original poster walks into traffic because he is depwessed. Aw, boo hoo wittle boy.

You fag, suck it up.

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Thanks for the explanation of DEICIDE.
Soul' that was very devious. It sounds like something my boys would do --to one of ther friends.
I hear --"I'm gonna kill you til you die!" in weird voice when they are gaming. Followed by the usual insults. he one kid Bob used to pick on became a pretty good friend a few years later.

I agree though. There is no time line or limit to others being persecuted . It's happened for centuries and it will go on forever probaby. It isn't just in music or politics. We can choose not to be a participant though.

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soul-dude, thats evil

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Are you sure you aren't really a Marine?




Don't hate me for saying that. You're a sailor . I know that.

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in the navy....


doesn't say much for u?

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Ever hear of Navy seals? I have had them train me on over half the stuff I know about survival and mind over matter. The Navy isn't a easy ride like the... well I won't say the name but it rhymes with duharmy and they have no really good training to conduct themself like professional worriors. The Marines heart is in the right place with the Navy, but they always want to run in with guns blazing, poor crazy bastards... that is why thay are the few and proud, because its all about natural selection for them. Sailors around the world are folk that have the same uniforms, the most fun, drink, fight, curse, lust, love, work the hardest, lose everyone or no one on deployment, sing the best songs, speak our own slang, have traditions older that anyone knows where they started, and make everyone else homophobic because we know that brows are before hoes.

The Navy kicks ass. We have it all from nuclear ships, to nuclear subs, to nuclear ICBM missiles, to nuclear tactical missiles, to Navy Seals, to F-14 tomcats, to FA-18E Hornets and Super Hornets, to Marines, to Marines flying Harrier jets, to Marines with the best weapons made, to Marines with shrap wooden sticks. That says a lot for me

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soul, are you in the navy right now?

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Yes, I'm a nuclear engineer in the Navy, just like Walpurgis will be in 5 more months. It's a bitch of a job hard work too.

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it was a joke

the village people.

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