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Old 2004-11-21, 09:49
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Itís brainless to talk about your ex girlfriends the way you do know. Yeah, maybe it was a fucking time with her, but no reason to write such an obstinate lyric, to appear so fucking brutal.

You are all so fucking stereotypes, and think metal is the music of all bad. Because of you, the metal scene is fucked up.
Fuck you, dickless newb! May the Ancient Ones rip out your mother's filthy cunt entrails and stick them up your lose asshole!
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Old 2004-11-21, 10:22
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Fuck you, dickless newb! May the Ancient Ones rip out your mother's filthy cunt entrails and stick them up your lose asshole!



haha, see what I mean! Thx dude, you are the best example of a fucking mother fucker who wants to be bad, but in real he is just a stupid guy, nothing else to do then writing lyrics about killing and fucking corpses.
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Old 2004-11-21, 11:43
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haha, see what I mean! Thx dude, you are the best example of a fucking mother fucker who wants to be bad, but in real he is just a stupid guy, nothing else to do then writing lyrics about killing and fucking corpses.
You're welcome!
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Old 2004-11-21, 16:01
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Back to the lyrics:
You didnít even use intelligent words, metaphors, similes and so on.

You're really a bit stuck up about that.

Gore lyrics are, at best, fun. If you start writing them as though you're writing something serious - i.e., using intelligent words, metaphors, similes, and so on - then you deserve the criticism you've given. They're stupid, true, but if you're going to write stupid you might as well embrace that. In general it's best to use a vocabulary and technique suited to your subject, not insist on the same for every subject.

And I don't think a poem can be judged simply on whether or not it uses intelligent words, metaphors, similes, and so on. A lot of very good poetry, and lyrics, was written without any of that, and a lot of dog shit poetry, and lyrics, was written with a broad vocabulary and glutted with symbolism. It can't just be forced in, and you can't reject good works because you've imposed artificial standards on them. Is this a good example of one you can't reject? Not really, but that shouldn't be the first thing to come to your mind when evaluating a poem or set of lyrics.
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Old 2004-11-21, 18:48
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Good meter, fun, catchy. I read similar lyrics before from someone else, but he was never in the same situation so they came out uninspired. Whoever takes these seriously must be trown down a well with a loaded gun for company.
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Old 2004-11-22, 20:40
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You shouldnt tell people what the fuck to write about. If this dude wanted to write a song about burying his ex gf, then fuckin let him. I liked this song, because i can relate to that feeling. Most guys can relate to really fucked up relationships, and wanting to fuck their ex's up like that. But can we do it? Not really sorta against the law. So why not write a song about it?
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Old 2004-11-23, 00:26
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Unlike many people, I would actually fuck someone up really bad like that. But, like Arkane said, it's kinda against the law, and yes, alot of people can relate to these lyrics so therefore, they don't suck.
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Old 2004-11-23, 18:17
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i think they're rather stupid if you ask me.
get over it, she dumped you. grow up.
that sort of obsession needs help.
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Old 2004-11-24, 01:16
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killer of trends it was probably in the heat of the moment.

i felt like that after my first girlfriend dumped me, she was an ice queen and then she leaves me for some guy she rooted on a scout camp.
hah, im in a relationship now, 10 months, i will never be dumped!!!

back on topic, maybe it helps with the pain in dealing with bitchy women. just take it easy, if it was ill-written eg. "i runned in2 da ho'z r00m d3n sta88ed hrr in d hed hehehehehehe w0t u fink of dat" then that would deserve criticism but just take it easy, loosen up a little.

brutur you shouldnt be taken so lightly. "because of you the metal scene is fucked up"??? because of YOU the metal scene is fucked up, arseless fags that dont have a sense of humour!!
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Old 2004-11-24, 03:20
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I think he'd be suicidal if he was that. But lighten the fuck up anyway Brutur.

Pretty decent Cannibal Corpse style lyrics. good job.
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Old 2004-11-24, 14:41
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what the fuck is going on here? that was only my opinion! Sry that there was someone who didn't like those lyrics! Man, you are all pissing me off
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Old 2004-11-24, 16:14
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what the fuck is going on here? that was only my opinion! Sry that there was someone who didn't like those lyrics! Man, you are all pissing me off

I didn't like them either, but I don't think that was the point. The point was you basically pissed all over their tastes in stating your own. You didn't simply say 'I don't like this,' you said 'People like you are what's wrong with metal, and make the scene suck.' You spent more time yelling at other people than at expressing your opinion, and now you come back and defend yourself by saying 'Sorry I didn't like the lyrics, but it's just my opinion!' Of course they were insulted. That doesn't mean you weren't right about gore lyrics, but it's cowardly to insult people and then hide behind your opinion.
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Old 2004-11-24, 18:20
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brutur, you are one of the biggest douche's ive seen on this forum.. u deserve an award in your sig. not because u didn't like my lyrics, because your just dumb. id like to see some of your poetry(including intelligent words and metaphors, oh my..) submitted on here, and ill give u my honest opinion.
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Itís brainless to talk about your ex girlfriends the way you do know. Yeah, maybe it was a fucking time with her, but no reason to write such an obstinate lyric, to appear so fucking brutal.

and to set this straight, i broke up with her, because she was dumb, like you.
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see drag. that was also a stupid post.
we need stupid post police. I'd have fines of up to $1000 bucks though.
credit's right.
I posted my opinion because if you feel those emotions even in "the heat of the moment" you do actually need help. When someone fucks you over you should not want to disembowel them. That's a bit extreme.
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Old 2004-11-24, 21:06
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see drag. that was also a stupid post.
we need stupid post police. I'd have fines of up to $1000 bucks though.
credit's right.
I posted my opinion because if you feel those emotions even in "the heat of the moment" you do actually need help. When someone fucks you over you should not want to disembowel them. That's a bit extreme.

like said a couple times already in this post, its not meant to be taken seriously.. just because it was influenced by some wench, doesn't mean id ever go through with it.
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Old 2004-11-24, 21:57
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well as long as the writer (you) wrote it in jest. it's cool.
but people who take that shit serious are fucking insane.
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I don't know, maybe those are over exagerated, and women have trouble with bad break ups too you know. Overobsession like that is worthless, but it can help someone get over it, and it's all in good fun. Just because he wrote that kind of stuff doesn't mean he's going to do it.
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i almost wish this thread would be closed.. cause the same shit is being said over and over.
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I don't know, maybe those are over exagerated, and women have trouble with bad break ups too you know. Overobsession like that is worthless, but it can help someone get over it, and it's all in good fun. Just because he wrote that kind of stuff doesn't mean he's going to do it.


He is So.Il.ain though! Of course HE means it in a funny way! All weman from there love to fuck young mens minds up to the point of techno! Thay all also like anal to the point of bitching about their past boy friends at the sametime.
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Old 2004-11-28, 09:07
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Thay all also like anal .

Most of em don't.
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