2003-08-25, 12:50
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Slut Slayer, death metal
Here is a grotesque tale of killing a dirty harlot (probably influenced by my ex). Enjoy.
"Slut Slayer"
scream my little pig,
your crying as i dig,
your grave is now your home,
sufficate, now die alone,
your skin is like butter,
as im cutting into you,
last plea a mutter,
when its stabbing through,
blood flows so freely,
your guts are on the floor,
the hunger within me,
cant wait anymore,
feel, the edge, of my knife,
know, its the end, of your life,
your so pretty, when you bleed,
you struggle but its pointless,
not much blood left to lose,
i ripped out your intestines,
and made a little noose,
your organs i will sever,
but you cant feel a thing,
gasping with pleasure,
death will only bring,
the end to your torture,
the end to all your pain,
the end of your future,
clogging up the drain,
feel, the edge, of my knife,
know, its the end, of your life,
your so pretty, when you bleed,
the time has come,
for you to die,
one final slice,
through your eye,
your mind is torn,
as i put you to rest,
you fucking whore,
you left me, with such a mess.
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............_ )).........................
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......(______)......................
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.____|___|________........
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.|......ice-cream....|.|__|..\___
.|.........................|..............*|
.|_.....___________.....__.o|
....(...)....~.~~.>--<o.(...).......
Last edited by Drag the Waters : 2004-11-20 at 23:52.
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2003-08-25, 19:45
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Very very good. Very Chris Barnes-ish. I have a couple of songs like that myself...fucking ex-girlfriends, you hate them but with out them you can't write songs 
Keep up the good work 
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2003-08-29, 21:55
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Very very good. Very Chris Barnes-ish. I have a couple of songs like that myself...fucking ex-girlfriends, you hate them but with out them you can't write songs
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haha so true.
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2003-08-30, 11:38
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this one is magnificent!
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2003-09-02, 15:50
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Cool as fuck. 
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..............................................................................That night he drove to the graveyard and dug up her lifeless body, he then eagerly returned home, positioned the corpse in his bed, and after almost forty years of celibacy, thusly began his first intimate aquantence with the feamale gender. Gein found the corpse so sexually stimulating that he ended up eating parts of the body, and making a waistecoat of the skin, so he could wear it and become a woman whenever he wanted to .......................................................................................... ..........
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2003-09-05, 20:25
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pretty tight, man. now you have to send her a copy...
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2003-09-07, 18:04
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I would send my ex that.
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Man, I get real sweaty after I wack my dong. Yeah, cause I headbang while I do, and I can't really "Jump" (haha ) like VanHalen in a dorm room, so I just walk back and forth....haha a couple days ago I was jumping up and down on my bed, with my pants down and my roommate came in when I wasn't looking, hahaha.
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2003-09-16, 19:35
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I'd say it would have fit in nicely on The Bleeding, good job
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2004-11-19, 12:55
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Nice and gory, well done.
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2004-11-20, 11:04
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Fucking brilliant! Kill the bitch, dude!  |
2004-11-20, 15:23
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Yes i fucking hate ex's. I want to do that exact same shit to mine.
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2004-11-20, 19:18
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i third that. drag, you're a pioneer.  |
2004-11-20, 21:47
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Not bad!
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2004-11-20, 23:33
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this has gotta go to music dude, it's fucking great
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2004-11-20, 23:54
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thanks for digging this up, and all the props. shortly after posting this i came up with a chorus for it, so i've revised it.
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2004-11-21, 05:27
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Not bad at all!
WTF is wrong with you little young Illinois boys and your sycho women?
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2004-11-21, 05:50
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... lol, you are all so ironic
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2004-11-21, 05:55
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Why, what do you mean?
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2004-11-21, 06:16
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It’s brainless to talk about your ex girlfriends the way you do know. Yeah, maybe it was a fucking time with her, but no reason to write such an obstinate lyric, to appear so fucking brutal.
You are all so fucking stereotypes, and think metal is the music of all bad. Because of you, the metal scene is fucked up.
Back to the lyrics:
You didn’t even use intelligent words, metaphors, similes and so on.
That’s my opinion on this, if that’s not true, prove me better.
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My Dear!"
- by Devil Doll (The Girl who was... Death)
"In an Insane World,
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2004-11-21, 06:42
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You are part right! Dudes must stop writing songs about thier beloved Illinois dick-craving, munching my cock behind thier back's sluts.
If you lose that slut to a bigger cock than just deal with it and don't write a God damn song about it and post it online  I don't really give a damn if some easy slut country poontang broke some other poor country boy wanna B metalhead's heart, but I was just trying to help this poor Dicksnot lovering poster fan feel better about himself and the fact that he hasn't posted in months because he has been stuck up this sluts ass!... Perhaps after I  |
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