I didn't remember writing this. I just found it within my archieves so I thought I'd share it. Just remember it was written by a girl -type person. And it's sort of one of THOSE pieces....... but somebody may write like that about you someday. Thanks for reading and constructive comments always appreciated.

"A Song to a Knight"

Just when I thought there was no tomorrow ,
A knight so bold offered me his hand,
He took me to a castle lonely -
And told me his demands.

He said he wanted to stay forever
In my arms so warm,
And in exchange he'd keep me safe
And keep me from all harm.

I looked into his eyes of blue
And soon I faded fast.
Into the morning mist I went,
Speechless as in the past.

I wanted to say what I could not
Because my heart was torn.
And I scowled and pursed my lips in torment-
Of ideas he had borne.

Because this knight of strength so true
Held captive my heart in hand,
I felt the radiant glow of love
Coming from this man.

"I cannot stay with you right now ,"
I sadly said to him.
It seemed a lifetime I had waited.
It may not come again.

But I said I would always have
A spark inside my soul.
And I would keep it ever there
Til my heart grows cold.

Someday I may have his heart by mine
In more than just my dreams,
But dreams are all I have right now.
Will he feel the same for me?

BJH

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heh, and you posted this in a metal forum...
ehhhhhhhh, I can't really critique this...
...probably why no one has really answered back yet.

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Yeah, you're right !! Hmm, think Lacuna Coil could ever do something like this ???? Or 12th Century Metal ??? That would be different.

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